Reviews for My Promise
snowgoddess52 chapter 3 . 7/9/2007
you should update this.
TheOtaku Akatsuki chapter 3 . 6/9/2006
wonder if sasuke even remembers him...
rldarling chapter 2 . 2/12/2006
and then everyone makes a strange face and wants to barf/crack up. silly Gai&Lee...

your English is very good!
nothing chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
it was okay, i really hate that girl that punched naruto though

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nitaice chapter 3 . 1/7/2005
too cool. please continue. this is so awsome
Piper Julian chapter 3 . 12/7/2004
awesome
dee-unlm1t3d chapter 3 . 12/6/2004
to be honest from what i seen there is no originality especially your oc character.. He is basically a naruto clone and their is no change from the original story except people doing other people's parts... I really don't see you do anything unique in this story or improve upon what others already did... Sorry but if I offended you, but I just had to give my 2 cents into this...
dee-unlm1t3d chapter 3 . 12/6/2004
to be honest from what i seen there is no originality especially your oc character.. He is basically a naruto clone and their is no change from the original story except people doing other people's parts... I really don't see you do anything unique in this story or improve upon what others already did... Sorry but if I offended you, but I just had to give my 2 cents into this...
Piper Julian chapter 2 . 11/30/2004
cool i liked the old title better
Falcon-Rider chapter 2 . 9/7/2004
great overall, just a few name errors: Gai and Uchiha not uchiwa :)
ghostninja85 chapter 2 . 9/7/2004
This is an interesting story.

A Mary Sue is a perfect OC. They are increadibly powerful and they have no character flaws. Many people dislike them because they are even more unreal than most fictional characters. It's too early to tell if your OC's are Mary Sues. Just don't overpower them and make them perfect.

As to relationships, I vote for a SasuNaru NaruSasu pairing.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon!
alchino chapter 2 . 9/7/2004
update!
Taisa Ayase chapter 2 . 9/7/2004
IT's UCHIHA , not Uchiwa!
Simara chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Well, this is certainly an interesting start. Not many of these type of stories start with Sasuke as a friend right off the bat. Since this is off to a good start, I really hope that you'll update soon.

Cheers,

Simara
Taisa Ayase chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
so far, the story is good, but I would like to recommend you to stay off the Caps Lock. Also it would be better if you were to separate the dialogues of different characters. It is easier to read.
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