|Reviews for Strangers on a Train|
| g20rambo chapter 6 . 9/22/2014
I've read six of your stories so far. They are really good! You definitely have writing talent. I love how you give details about each witness's life, and I like the exchanges they have with Peter. Very creative and authentic.
| g20rambo chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
I really liked this! The writing, the confrontation, the confusion Richard had as he tried to decide whether this was the right young man and then just as soon as he thought he was sure, he doubted himself again. So human, so real. Really loved this! Can't wait to read the others!
(And I love your title choice! Made me think of Alfred Hitchcock.)
| SerenePhenix chapter 9 . 5/30/2014
I can't express just how original some of these ideas are and how well you have constructed the characters! This is truly an amizing work.
| Vi-Violence chapter 12 . 4/29/2014
Very nice, this is great.
| Elton chapter 12 . 12/11/2013
These were wonderful. Very creative/imaginative. Good Job. You did especially well at not falling into a repetative routine. Each story was refreshingly unique.
| Lmb111514 chapter 12 . 11/21/2013
Awww, sweet ending...This story was great, I loved it and can't wait for more amazing stories of yours!
| Dragon Courage chapter 12 . 9/22/2013
I loved this
| ironhair chapter 12 . 9/1/2013
Nice plot and good writing. Thanks.
| Trying -Helps chapter 8 . 6/6/2013
That was nice. I liked the way that chapter ended especially out of all the stories I have read so far. I like the way you can bring interest in a story in such a short period of time with little information. You seem to have gotten better at summarizing what happened to the people too. I give this one five out of five. I totally wish I could get more out of you one shots, you should write a longer story, you totally have the skill for it.
Take the Good Person Test (third search result on Google).
| Melan B.D chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
| Erisabeisuu chapter 12 . 9/23/2012
Lol, oh I loved the part where's he's like 'Not another one!' I couldn't stop giggling at it!
And the subway one was funny too. I read it and I was instantly face-plaming and thinking David you idiot.
The others are great too, and it's interesting to see you come up with stories for them all. I really enjoyed this.
Good Luck in Everything,
| SailorSea chapter 12 . 7/8/2012
I absolutely love this story! I like how you show the wide variety of characters that were on the train and how each reacted a little differently than Pete but still wanted to help him. Really funny last chapter too
| Fick Chick chapter 11 . 7/7/2012
i'm glad you told the story of the kid who threatened the rest of the passengers
| Fick Chick chapter 9 . 7/7/2012
i like the chapter
| servant123 chapter 12 . 5/19/2012
Nice twist of things- I like the wrap up very much :) Do you plan on ever adding more chapters? I wish you would- you've suprised me with perspectives I never would have considered and I've enjoyed every part of it. Keep up your Amazing writing, and I hope I get to read more of it soon!
God bless! :)