Reviews for Hidden Love
LamoyaSmith vs blakeNtori chapter 23 . 6/11/2012
Great story... :-)

I felt so bad 4 dustin...everything dat happened was stupid n uncalled4...

Hunter n dustin should hav been able da b together without all the drama dat happened, love is love kant help who u love...

Shane n tori bein an asshole "especially shane" wasnt necessary...

Blake was a good brother 4 wat he did even tho it cause unhappiness he was a great brother n friend...

Cam marah n kara was great 4 bein there 4 them...

Bt overall am just glad they kissed n made up...(sorta)
IdrilSilmarwenEamaneLuinwe chapter 23 . 3/13/2012
This story is soo epic at first I hated the way tori and shane treated dustin and hunter but now it works out really good and I can't actually see it put any other way :) I hope you do a sequel to this story as well you are an excellent writer xx
JasonLeeScottFan chapter 24 . 4/12/2010
This was a great story but you left too many things open at the end. Did Shane stay at the academy? What about Blake and motocross? And how are Shane and Cam going to deal with their feelings? Did Tori and Blake work things out? No offense, but you really need to write a sequel or make the ending more realistic.
Leather Jacket chapter 23 . 7/28/2009
Wow. This reads really ... real. From the fears of Dustin and Hunter to the over-reaction of Tori and Shane, to the reveals, to the resolution. I believed all of it. I'm amazed. And a little sad.

Couple little things that could be caught ... although they're probably easy to miss. But your story telling, grammar and flow are really good.

Did I say your story telling was *good*? Reading Chapter 16, I'm ... floored. This is the best twist EVER!
griffin blackwood chapter 23 . 5/28/2008
very cute
griffin blackwood chapter 22 . 5/28/2008
lol writing about thanksgiving at this time of year
griffin blackwood chapter 21 . 5/28/2008
such a dustin moment.. are kara and hunter getting together?
griffin blackwood chapter 20 . 5/28/2008
why hasnt sensei done anything about jeff? or cam do something? you think they would be all knowing if they know about everything else
griffin blackwood chapter 19 . 5/28/2008
how hard would it for dustin to go visit hunter?
griffin blackwood chapter 18 . 5/28/2008
wow i hope cam and shane get together... but not to plot to break up dustin and hunter lol
griffin blackwood chapter 17 . 5/28/2008
they should just teach at the other ninja school so much less drama lol
griffin blackwood chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
so addictive. i have the bad habit of power reading long stories in the middle of the night
griffin blackwood chapter 15 . 5/28/2008
why do i feel shane is heading toward the fence and tori is taking his former place?
griffin blackwood chapter 14 . 5/28/2008
i hope tori can fix herself
griffin blackwood chapter 13 . 5/28/2008
aw
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