Reviews for Worth the Trouble
MistressWinowyll chapter 30 . 7/30/2009
Well, he's trying, but she's not exactly faultless either. Still, it's harder for a girl to swallow their pride then it is a guy. Still, us girls expect them to over us. I'm curious where the next chapter takes the story.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 29 . 7/30/2009
You know, it may be that the words they are saying now hurt, they at least got them off their chest. I also see what Shikamaru is not saying is that she would date anyone other then him. Lets see what his genius can do about trying to work things out.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 28 . 7/30/2009
Well, I'm glad you're going to have them see each other. I can't believe he's telling one girl one thing who obviously feels something for Temari and then turn to Ino? Esh. He needs to take a break from either of them and just live or let them live and choose for themselves.

your Mistress.

Good chapter.
MistressWinowyll chapter 27 . 7/30/2009
Nothing will work themselves out without putting effort into it. Anything worth doing will always troublesome. Sorry, but Shikamaru is being a pain to himself and to two of these girls at the moment. Hinata is being patient with him and Naruto it would seem. Of course, it would be that he is busy being the best he can for everyone...but this is his girl. He should have done something to solidify how he feels about her.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 26 . 7/30/2009
I'm glad Ino and Shikamaru survived. It was also nice to see Temari let go of him in such an adult way. I liked how you described Tenten's tenacity.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 25 . 7/30/2009
Wow, that is sad...yet, I'm glad he is getting Temari out of his system. What a slut! She didn't even have the decency to feel guilty about just getting done with the guy she was with. And Shikamaru! I'm sure he could smell the guy on her, let alone the 'body fluids' that were surely on her and he's touching her? Gah!

Still, it was a nice chapter and a bit of closure...thankfully.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 24 . 7/30/2009
I'm glad Chouji put a fire under his ass, but I'm already sure what's going to happen. He's going to break up with Temari. I don't blame him.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 23 . 7/30/2009
Well, that is something close to what I expected. Now, the question I have is Ino sleeping with other guys? Yes, she has been known to 'kiss' other guys, but is she sleeping with them? It was a nice make up moment for Ino/Shika. Still, I can't help but see how their inability to stop hurting each other because they are both too scared to do anything with each other. I blame Ino over all. Shikamaru went to Temari for comfort when Ino wouldn't give it to him. Who could blame him?

your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 22 . 7/30/2009
I guess Ino is a much better choice now that Temari has been with everyone, including Shino...::twitch::

How uncomfortable is that to know all your friends has been with a girl you were with. That's sharing the 'love' a little to freely for a guy...at least, any decent guy who has any self respect for himself. I'm sure that would be a fine conversation piece for them.

"So, did Temari do that thing with her tongue to you?"

"No, she tickled me like she did Kiba in all the goodie spots."

"Oh, I'll have to ask her to do that for me next time..."

I just can't see how a guy can sit there a be next to a girl who has been touched, pleasured, and exhausted with a sheen of sweat under your friend and still think she's still attractive. Sorry, in my opinion, Shikamaru is just sick. I wonder if that's something Ino thinks as well. For her, I can see how he seems just ugly. Gah, I hate that this story had Temari like that. Still, it's your story, hon.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 21 . 7/30/2009
Well, that was painful to read. Temari is sleeping with other people while she is his 'friend with benefits'...I don't know what's more disgusting, that she's screwing around with other guys and him or that he's sleeping with her after she's been with other guys.

Sorry, but this Temari is no one's prize...but, all I can say, i guess, is that in the ninja world she's just doing whatever she wants to comfort herself. She's obviously not hurting Shikamaru with it so it's kind of a mind numbing 'what's the point?' Wow, that was really painful to read. Great chapter, mind you. I really enjoyed it.

Your Mistress.

PS I don't see Shikamaru even considering her anymore. That's just my opinion. Who would want to be with someone who feels comfortable sleeping with you after sleeping with someone else?
MistressWinowyll chapter 20 . 7/30/2009
I really liked this chapter. I can't really even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed each character putting in their two bits about what is going on with them. Out of all of them, though, I think Lee is the one I feel the sorriest for the most. He has to be in the middle of Ino and a Sakura rant, know what's going on, and, probably, not tell his friend. Hinata was really sweet and wise in those short, but brief moments. Temari has been dealing with things very well, so far. I'm surprised she hasn't tried to visibly up one over on Ino just to spite her.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 19 . 7/30/2009
The taste of one's own medicine is usually bitter...

As if Ino has any room to feel insulted that Shikamaru brought someone else. She even openly told him that she was bringing someone else. Pft! I'm glad she got the feel the stab of an emotional kunai that proves she has no control over what happens between her and Shikamaru.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 18 . 7/30/2009
That was an adorable chapter. Hinata truly is precious. Still, Shikamaru is stubbornly ignoring the possibilities with Temari. You know how I feel about that.

Your Mistress.
MistressWinowyll chapter 17 . 7/30/2009
Wow, that's a little sad that you have Temari labeled as a tramp, considering she's one of the top families in Suna. Still, it's your story and she seems to 'want' to do better then have him as a passing fling. I can kind of tell this is aiming more for a Ino/Shika then anything else. Still, it's too early to determine the end results.

Your Mistress.

PS-I was surprised Hinata didn't faint.
MistressWinowyll chapter 16 . 7/30/2009
Fu, fu, fu...Temari's a naughty girl. But she knows what she wants and damn everyone else if they get in her way...uhm...by the way, who was her first or is she always like this with other guys? That's kind of a creepy thought, but, nevertheless, one I'm sure he'll probably want to know if he wants to be more then just intimate acquaintances.
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