Reviews for Destiny Prophecies: Sphere and Stone
Tarica chapter 25 . 5/17/2010
I have to say, this is easily one of the most interesting Yu-Gi-Oh! crossovers I've read to date. Interesting enough that I've spent the last 4 days reading it. I really would love to see how this turns out, if you ever decide to come back to it. I won't dare demand you update it, since I have my own unfinished stories and no motivation to complete them, but if you ever get the urge to complete this one, I'll be quite happy to read it.

BTW, I think this last chapter is my favorite, my curiosity has truly been piqued by it. I loved that Yami knew they were talking about him. I always got that sense off him on the show, like he knew exactly what was going on around him when others were being sneaky (and if he didn't, he would damn well figure it out).
Minirowan chapter 25 . 3/9/2010
The discussion those guys were having was very painful to read. It hurts to even read others contemplate Yami making a Horcrux!

Although, what really annoys me is Ron's jealousy. The stupid prat get's so caught up in his own emotions that he's blind to the damage he causes to Hermione with his inane possessiveness. Idiot

Anyway, these close minded wizards don't acknowledge that Shadow Magic is different from Wizard magic. The "golden" trio should consider that fact in their speculations. Also, Horcruxes only store a piece of the soul in an object, not the entire thing or else it would be mute point. They would be dead because the entire soul is stuck in a rock or something.

I'm a bit surprised that Ron actually gave Yami the benefit of the doubt concerning the "evil pharaoh" thing. I expected it more from Harry or something.

Great chapter!

P.s. I'm not sure if you've abandoned your account, if you've forgotten about it, or ignore any and all mail from . Regardless, if you ever read this, be sure to know that you've written a wonderful story and those reviewers who did not take the time to thank you by writing at least "great chapter!" ruined it for themselves. If by chance you ever revive this story I will read it as soon as possible. Even better, I'll reread it.

I hope everything is going well with school and that you pass every subject. I'd say "pass with flying colors" but that's cliche and frankly I don't know how smart you are. Your best is your best and that is all anyone should ask for.

Oh man...I've turned this from a thank you review to a life coach review.

Thanks again!
Minirowan chapter 24 . 3/9/2010
Very good chapter, as always. Once again, I don't know where to start. Yami and Marik's conversation was a semi bonding moment, I think Marik is finally used to having Yami/Yugi as a friend. Now they have to subtlely deal with Bakura without making him feel alianated and alone. I reall don't want him reverting. That would be horrible! Also, is he jealous of the attention Ryou give Sirius? It certainly sounded that way when he was complaining about him. So cute x3

Anyway, I was thinking Zork was the third presence and not Voldemort. Although I guess that makes more sense as to why the board pointed to Harry rather than the board just singleling out those with Shadow Magic. Still, they both seem to be valid conclusion...

Voldemort is Akunadin's reincarnation! Dang, even after one life gone horrible worng Voldemort can't get things right a second time around. That sucks. I feel mildly sad for him, can't even make a good life for himself. Ok, pity moment's over now. Voldy doesn't deserve it.

Great chapter!
Minirowan chapter 23 . 3/9/2010
That was so creepy! It was intense! I loved it!

Was the spirit a spirit of the Shadow Realm? I think it is considering it singled out Yugi, Ryou, and Harry. But now that I think about it, what could this third magical presense be? Wizard magic, Shadow magic, and what else? The suspense is too much!

I REALLY love this chapter. Sirius was a total jerk but his outburst wasn't totally unexpected. Yami and Bakura's verbal duel had me holding in my laughter, they were hilarious. And like I said, the seance thing was creepy but great to read. You did a great job on making the reader feel as if they were right there and Bakura spoke with the spirit.
Minirowan chapter 22 . 3/8/2010
Typical. Ron had to run his mouth and piss off Marik. If he wasn't to hot headed he'd actually try to see other implications of what Marik said about his family. Ugh. Idiot!

There are many scenes I'd like to comment on. Yami, Yugi, Ryou, and Bakura convincing Marik to stay was a very humorous and touching moment. I really loved how you resolved that issue.

Now Ron and Hermione need to get off their high horses and contemplate the fact that they are alive! If those three were against them they'd be rotting in Riddle Manor right now. Not arguing over the most loyal friends they could ever have. Man, they can be so stupid.

Great chapter, I can't wait to see Bakura with the Ouija board *evil cackle* xD
Minirowan chapter 21 . 3/8/2010
I...have nothing to say. This was great as usual. your approach to revealing the Item holders was much more subtle than other fics I've read. Interesting.

I loved the entire interchange between the trio, teachers, and Sirius. Nicely done.
Minirowan chapter 20 . 3/8/2010
What the heck? There was so much going on in this chapter that I don't even know where to begin. The only thing I can think of is that Marik and Yugi should have been able to help Ryou since Marik lived in Ryous head for a while and Bakura hid himself in the puzzle during Battle City. Well, at least Marik should be able to help considering he has the rod...

Minirowan chapter 19 . 3/8/2010
This is getting really good. I'm surprised Marik flipped like that. I would've thought he'd only...forget it. You depicted him perfectly now that I'm actually thinking about it.

It's good to see Harry find out about Sirius and Ryou. By the way, when Sirius is released will they save Luna's mom too? I know she's trapped in the Shadow Realm. It's unfortunate that Marik was almost sucked in by his yami's presence though.
Minirowan chapter 18 . 3/8/2010
You like Shadi? Some people actually like Shadi? Blegh xP

As soon as Yami mentioned "fate" the dude's name popped in my mind. Ugh. I still can't stand the guy.

Anyway, I think the hikaris should be more involved. Whenever the dark trio get together those two are always out of the loop. They could appear in spirit/astral form and contribute to their musings. Still, these guys sure do have fun discussions. It's unfortunate how they usually end up arguing though.

I still say Yami and Bakura need to confront their memories! It would be even better if you somehow had them talk to each other about it. Maybe by hikari to hikari but that is as likely as Yami and Bakura sharing a hug. The two are touchy about anything their yamis reveal to them.
Minirowan chapter 17 . 3/8/2010
O, epic-ness xD

I really wish Harry found out about Sirius already along with the Shadow Realm in the Ministry. Also, can they just kill Voldemort already? The thing is getting on my nerves

Sorry...that was me being impatient. If you did all that in the span of a few chapters this story wouldn't amount to much after all the hard work you've put into it.

Well, great chapter. I'm off to read the next one. ]
Minirowan chapter 16 . 3/8/2010
So...Shadi's talking about Harry? What's he going to do from now on? I doubt he's going to stay at Hogwarts. Honestly, I say Marik should hate Shadi a bit more. He's such a gray character! He does a ton of bad stuff for the sake of the Pharaoh and blah, blah, blah. Ugh. The way you wrote his appearance made me feel for him though.

So, MarikxRyou/Bakura bonding time. I hope there'll be some MarikxYugi/Yami bonding. These guys really need to become closer friends. I have the impression that they are closer later in the series, at least I hope they are.

Anyway, kudos to a job well done.
Minirowan chapter 15 . 3/8/2010
In another fic Ryou killed Umbridge by using the Shadows. And yes, it was Ryou. The Shadows kind of influenced him to act that way. It's hard to explain without giving away any spoilers.

Anyway, nicely written. I"m honestly not sure if Marik would have gone that far from a cut though. I suppose it's possible since a normal pobably wouldn't have the same effect but words inscribed into his flesh would. I really feel bad for these guys. Unfortunately I don't think Bakura and Yami can have an hones conversation about their memories. Does Yami really not remember his name? He heard it at the end of the memory after all...

Great chapter. The drama (or is it angst?) was done perfectly.
Minirowan chapter 14 . 3/8/2010
The duel was pretty good. I only have duels from one fic to go on but yours are easy to read.

I'm so glad Sirius won't be going nuts in the Shadow Realm! Although these guys need to hurry up and figure out the Veil is connected to the Shadow Realm. I don't know how you're going to explain it. Maybe it's an ancient Egyptian artifact brought back by Luna's mom and is the origin of the Shadow Games. I mean, these things were started somehow and I doubt it happened by a royal priest sitting down to think this stuff through 'cuz he was bored.

Anyway, great chapter. I'm surprised Yami wasn't in his leather. I need to look up pictures and admire all the YGO bishies x3
Minirowan chapter 13 . 3/8/2010
I noticed a small mistake. When they read the article Harry said it didn't mention the veil but when Ryou read it, it spoke of an ancient archway. That's all. It's a small inconsistency but it could mess things up.

Anyway, did you have to bring back Umbridge? When Lupin taught in third year nothing stopped him from teaching. Sure there was the full moon but there was never a substitute. I hate that woman.
Minirowan chapter 12 . 3/7/2010
Interesting chapter, very interesting. There are so many things I wish would happen, like Harry finding out about Sirius in Ryou's head. Or the golden trio finding out about Bakura and Yami. It's truly annoying to read the conclusions Hermione comes up with. Really, when was she so cynical?
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