Reviews for Destiny Prophecies: Sphere and Stone |
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Minirowan chapter 11 . 3/7/2010 I wonder if the fun's sucked out when Bakura's actually allowed to do what he wants. Those situations are always weird... Well, that common room scene with Marik and Yugi was real cute. I loved it really. Now I can't wait to see what Bakura does with his freedom. |
Minirowan chapter 10 . 3/7/2010 The hyper scene was rather unexpected. Random I should say. It felt like I was reading crack o_o It did make me laugh though, so kudos. How did Madam Hooch fall asleep? I wonder what spell Malfoy used... |
Minirowan chapter 9 . 3/7/2010 I wonder how this is all going to go... I need to finish chem TT |
Minirowan chapter 8 . 3/7/2010 Great chapter. Snape is his usual self and Marik is being cool. I really wish Yami would let Yugi learn to protect himself. He always steps in. |
Minirowan chapter 7 . 3/7/2010 I agree with you. As much as I'd love to see Ryou and Bakura bond, it's never gonna happen. I think it has a lot to do with Bakura being possessed by Zork. If it wasn't for him I bet Bakura would be a teeny bit less evil and more human. |
Minirowan chapter 6 . 3/7/2010 "RA! You killed him!" I love that! I think it's about time Yugi started to adopt his heritage, well his "spiritual" heritage. That small fight scene, love it. There isn't enough action in these worlds other than duel monsters and magic. There certainly could be much more epic fight scenes if they actually fought. P.s. my next few reviews won't be very good since I'm supposed to be doing homework right now. I just can't drop this story yet x3 |
Minirowan chapter 5 . 3/7/2010 That was nice. Their encounter with Malfoy was rather enjoyable, although that little creep is always annoying to read about unless it contributes to the plot. So they met the golden trio, huh? Marik's more antisocial than I expected but I've never really seen him out of Battle City. Great chapter ] |
Minirowan chapter 4 . 3/7/2010 That scene with Bakura running around was awesome. I'm in a bit of a rush at the moment so I won't linger praising your greatness. Love the chapter and I can't wait to see how Harry reacts to Ryou and Bakura being connected with Sirius. |
Minirowan chapter 3 . 3/7/2010 So now that the Shadows have had a taste of the human spirit they're out of control? I wonder when the YGO trio will find out about the veil and restrain it. I imagine they can. On a side note, Voldemort is an idiot. The most foolishly arrogant, egotistical villain I've seen. Wait, that's a lie. They're all the same. He actually thinks he's darkness? That anything else dark exists to help him? I'd love to laugh in his face if he wouldn't kill me first -.- Anyway, great chapter. My only complaint is that I don't understand why Yami would want to tell Dumbledore off the bat about the tablet and that it's a bit confusing to distinguish Yami speaking from the rest of the text. |
Minirowan chapter 2 . 3/7/2010 Ok, either I'm sleep deprived or I need to watch another sappy movie to build up immunity, but this chapter brought tears to my eyes. It was such a touching moment between Ryou and Yugi. The anime seriously neglected Ryou and Bakura's character development and barely showed any true bonding moments between them and the others. I hate that. I find solace in fics but even then it's probably worse because it never happened in canon. Anyway, you can already glean from what I've already written how I feel about this chapter. There's not much to say except other than being a first time writer, at least on this site, you are amazingly skilled. I commend your greatness *applause* |
Minirowan chapter 1 . 3/7/2010 This is amazing. I've yet to read a YGOxHP crossover with this concept. At first your description of Sirius reminded me of Snape, but that didn't make sense since this is set in the OTP time line. It felt like an epiphany when I figured out it was Sirius. You know, I expected him to have a more violent reaction to Ryou's possession. I'm sure he heard of what happened to Ginny in second year. Then again, after who knows how long he's been in the Shadow Realm I guess things like that don't really matter. I also suspect he didn't want to scare away the (most likely) only sane person he's met since being dumped in there. Isn't it scary how complicated characters get when you actually think of reasons for their actions and how they react? I don't know how you writers do it. Anyway, good job on character portrayal and originality. ] P.s. I've read the note on your profile. It's unfortunate how some readers turned out but it's even the worse the loyal ones won't get the update they deserve. In any case, it would be wonderful if you continued the story, but it's your choice. If you've lost all interest why not find someone to adopt the fic? The last time you've updated a story was 3 years ago so I imagine you're either swamped with work or no longer interested. |
Aslook chapter 25 . 2/1/2010 WOW! Please Update soon! It has been nearly 5 years since your last update! I really love this story and I really don't want you to abandon it! |
ihonestlydontknow chapter 25 . 1/26/2010 YOU ARE MY HERO! There have been so many things in this story that I've wanted to see, or have just simply loved. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks Marik can out bad-guy Voldie any day of the week, and I LOVED the conflict of the former Gouhls had. That was SWEET XD DD I also got a kick out of the scene in Divination where Bakura and Yami are insulting each other, and the insults keep showing up on the ouija boards. That too was SWEET. I really wish you'd update, though... |
moonlightpie chapter 25 . 12/29/2009 This was awesome story (so far), I really enjoyed reading it. One of the best YGO/HP crossovers I've read. You kept characters alive and real and they actually did something. This was so worth of reading, but it is so shame that if you will not finish this. (I mean, I'd LOVE to read what would happen next.) I wonder why almost every YGO/HP crossover will be left unfinished. :s Anyway if you still read these reviews, I want to say that good luck if you'll try sometime in future to awake this story. |
Cmpteraddict chapter 25 . 12/14/2009 This is good. Please continue |