Reviews for Bad Places 2: Rebirth
spootycup chapter 6 . 11/8/2004
BubblyShell22 chapter 6 . 11/8/2004
Wow! Great chapter! Please update soon. I hope Leo will be ok and that his brothers get to him in time.
Phoenix Red Lion chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
Um...what can I say except WOW! That was just...WOW! Dark and bloody and WOW! I'm not sure if what Leo heard was real or fake...though I'm betting it was in his mind. And it sounds like Leo may have snapped. Please have more soon! This suspense is going to drive me crazy!


I really need to improve my vocabulary. *grin*
Pretender Fanatic chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
Oh wow! Man dude you know how to write the gore! That was great! Especially the hallucination. Poor Leo! I want him to kill Shredder but I don want him to turn into a feeder. *whines* Great job on this chapter! KUTGWUS

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Lioness-Goddess chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
Hmm...ok, so the guys really aren't dead, Leo was hallucinating? I think I get it.

This story is really good, even if it is a bit creepy.
EntropyMage chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
Yet again you manage to produce a wonderful chapter! I love your writing style, it portrays everyone's thoughts without cramping the flow of the story. I can not wait until your next update!
Ramica chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
Ah the intensity of the battle, the bloodshed. the fear for what Leo is turning into and what Shredder is forcing him to do knowing that Shredder has his own plan.

Deep, dark and well thought out. Awaiting the next chapter.
Doppleganger chapter 6 . 11/6/2004
Bloody awesome! And by bloody I mean that literally. Gore galore!
Reinbeauchaser chapter 6 . 11/6/2004
Okay, note to self - breath once or twice during the next chapter rather than try to hold ones breath for the duration! Good night, this was a fantastic bit of writing! Well done, well done indeed.

Enough said! Except - please update a bit quicker because I often have to re-read the previous chapter to remember where it left off. Of course, it's quite possible you take such time in order to craft such literature. In which case, update when you can, so long as you maintain the same quality writing!

Looking for more!

Be blessed.
Elphaba-Rose chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Hiya! Wow, this is brilliant, as good as the first. It's very interesting and tense too, with the DNA stuff. It's a very unusual but engaging aspect of Leo's life. Please don't give up, you're doing such a wonderful job!
Michelle chapter 5 . 10/19/2004
I love this story so far. Leo is my favorite character. I just hope he'll be ok. Homer quote: "Hey, Marge, I think Leo's going crazy." I had to do that. It just fits because Leo is kinda out there. Keep up the good work.
Jingeling chapter 5 . 10/18/2004
Yay! You make me happy! Great story!
Lioness-Goddess chapter 5 . 10/18/2004
oh Leo's turning into one of those monster things? AND he's going psycho...great...

Well, this is definitley a page turner.

Or should I say, mouse-clicker.
Lady ValarianMad Jill chapter 5 . 10/18/2004
At first I thought he was dying when I read that last chapter, but now...KC, we're at odds again...

YOU EVIL THING YOU! This is a lie! This isn't Leo!

This is a once-dormant Metroid disguised as Leo!

And yet...yet it's true...He IS changing...isn't he? Poor Splinter...I wonder how he's taking to it all...

Good nights, Somehow I know you are not going to make it better anytime soon...It's interesting, though. Really good work. The fight last chapter reminded me of their argument in the animated TV version of City At War. (I'll never live it down if I hear that my youngest cousin saw that one!)

Just don't hesistate to give Leo even the tiniest touch of, uh, light...okay...?

Keep it up, KC! I know I should stay away from your work...but you're okay, so I'll keep a vigil for more. Meantime, I'll let pretty ladies b*!

Ramica chapter 5 . 10/18/2004
The fact Leo can even consider harming his brothers where he couldn't before shows the change in him, the possibilites that he is going that way.

The office set up is very strange not normal by any means.

Leo ah, poor Leo just what have you become?

Of course you have to leave us dangling again.

Great chapter but really looking for more.
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