|Reviews for Back to Your Heart|
| Wicked-Mistress chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Uhh BsB disturbing but I like your story O_o
| Archangel Rhapsody chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
| Hagar chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
On the plus side, the last two lines are perfect, flow is good and the song is kind of fitting (I actually read the lyrics for a change...).
On the minus side, there are the standard overkills: vocabulary jars, excess adjectives/adverbs, repetition and too easy a hand on the elypses - nothing too serious, but still grating ("zephyr", "garnet", "blazing emerald", "pretend...fake...lie...").
Did I say perfect last lines?
| antoinettes chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
Aww, that was sweet. Very fitting. _
| Tex-chan chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
This was a great story! I like the picture of a brooding, introspective Gawl you painted - a very different image of him than the one we can usually see in the show! I really enjoyed the way you got into his thoughts and his feelings for Masami. Very nicely done. I hope you will post more GG stories. I would look forward to reading them.
| T-T chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
sucha sad ficcie! i really DO like gawl/masami coupling