|Reviews for Diary|
| xxxNikki-Kinoxxx chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
aww... very sweet! I think you should make another one! *I'll know if ya do cuz it'll be in my favelist*
| Nonakani chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
YAY! I like it!
| Pete Zaitcev chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
It looks as if the author tries to consider the Day of Flight a ritual suicide, to which Haibane inevitably ushered by their spirituality or other influences. If so, it's an interesting interpretation.
There were some very subtle technicalities. I think that the format does not mix with an action right. It is too meditative. Once an action is started, the reading becomes ponderous. Basically, from "She was in a little bit of a hurry" it was a dead getaway until after the fall and its consequences. Although certainly, this is only a personal opinion.
Silmarillion was a neat touch.
Would Nemu use books to stand upon? Looks like an OOC mistake to me.
This story is obviously linked with the "Snowfall", which is cool. They are done in a similar technique, almost like two chapters of an unknown fanfic. But I find this one more to my liking, as it deals with investigation of Nemu (by the way of using Sora).
| TeaRoses chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Lovely. Such a sweet slice of life of the Haibane world. And Nemu, somehow symbolizing the search for meaning. Thanks so much for writing this.
| Dark Day For Anime chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
This short story manages to sum up the haunting nature of Haibane Renmei with ease. If it wasn't for my current Haibane kick, I would have missed it. Glad to have caught it now.
| Kitsune Blood chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Aw...that was so sweet. Nemu isn't one of my favorite Haibane, but I like this story a lot, even if it is a one-shot and ends rather quickly. (all stories do in my mind). Continue writing, I'm curious what else you have.