|Reviews for Hidden Longing|
| Lacrymose chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Beautiful and romantic. Sad too.
| rowen chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
all i can say is continue it could be good or bad
| na chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
this was quite good and emotional, but i think that will and lyra would register more suprise when they find out they both planned marriages on the same day and exact same time
| Silwen Aurdomiel chapter 1 . 10/7/2004
excellent work! very sweet! i loved it!
| FunkyDory chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
Very fluffy. Just a one shot? Too bad. 'Twas good.
| hannirose chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
*sniff* *sob* I LOVED IT. Oh man, it was sad though. I wish they could have been together.
| TidyKiwi chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Cool, i like the way you made Will and Lyra think the same things at the same time _
| Saboteuse chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
This is so good, and so sad...