Reviews for Thin Lines
Ami the Elemental Sorceress chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
i love the way you portrayed eriol, in the anime he seems like some sort of omnipotent character, creating situations to help sakura transform all the cards. here we see the more human side of him, becuase he is ten years old. Question, i see this alot, and am confused by it, but were did you read that sakura's dad has half of clow reed's soul? cuz i've seen it in some fanfics, but not in the episodes. is it in the manga?
Ugly Kitten chapter 1 . 4/20/2003
Goodness...I didn't even think about, poor Eriol...or is is Clow? Oi, now you've got me confused! Hee hee, wonderful!
X Factor chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
this is very touching. WAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! *SNIFF*
C.Blossom chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
Hi , I really like this chapter . In your summary you stated that you have a fragile Ego , dose that mean that you are a guy ( boy)?

Well mabey could you read my story?

My story is called ,,... Sakura goes military.

I just finished ch.3.

YOu can e-mail me at
kristy chapter 1 . 9/8/2001
that is sooo GOOD.
sempei chapter 1 . 7/20/2001

philosophy...on a fanfic site

deep man, real deep

you know, you could make a real good story from this, telling how eriol gains or looses himself in

his struggle to be just...eriol

idea here?
Silverlight chapter 1 . 4/3/2001
Another Eriol fic...there aren't enough around. *sighs* Very well done, I really enjoyed reading this. Touching, emotional and truly brilliant. *claps hands* Now I want to write another Eriol fic, but I have 20 other fics in the way...*sighs* Arigato for the read...silverlight
Earth chapter 1 . 3/31/2001
Sooooooo Gooood! Eriol rules and this fic was sooo great! Thanks for the read!
rakko-chan chapter 1 . 2/9/2001
wow! doing an eriol fic as your fist fic. that's pretty brave _ (i'm a wimp... i just did some s&s fluffish stuff ;) anyway, that was way good, you're quite a talented writer _ for the sake of the world, keep on writing! _
kukki-chan chapter 1 . 2/8/2001
Wow... that had so much deapth, I'm speachless I dont know what to review. It was very thought provoking. I can't say I didnt like it, it was so beautiful, wow
tina chapter 1 . 2/7/2001
pretty good! you should turn this into a fic.
Li Kayun chapter 1 . 2/7/2001
*cries* poor eri-kun! *glomps the little ten-year-old* POOR, PPOOR, ERI-KUN!
Snowwolf chapter 1 . 2/7/2001
sad...dark...great writing!Poor Eriol!Sequel!