Reviews for The Eighth Guard
Tao1999 chapter 11 . 4/28/2011
I enjoyed this story, very much. I give it a 10/10. Keep up the good work. ;D
Dreamstrider chapter 8 . 12/20/2009
Well, Well! Two good, constantly updated stories! I'm pretty sure that's a record! Anyway, I decided to review this chapter because of the ending. Actually, in the Mahabharat, one of the main Hindu scriptures, Lord Krishna (at that time also known as Kanha) kills his evil uncle Kansa, and right before Kansa dies, Krishna shows him his true form, as the Supreme God. Sounds a lot like your ending, doesn't it?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
im just typing this cause i have nothing better to do... did you copy and paste the flashback or write it by memory/look at the other story?
happyemo chapter 11 . 5/14/2009
one of the best in my opinion... nice plot... but some people obviously didn't like the lemon... maybe you shouldn't have named the chapter as the real end... try writing in the end of the 10th chapter that the next is an optional lemon chapter... i rate it as a 9.5/10 maybe 'cause alex didn't put up much of a fight... well i guess it is hard to put a fight scene in writing... go ivan D... happyemo out ;D
PhantasmagoricBlade chapter 11 . 11/3/2007
LOL...Primitive viagra -'The Perv God dies due to a massive hemorrhage of his sides exploding cuz of large amounts of uncrontallable hysterical laughter'

Wouldn't that be a bitch to right down on the autopsy, eh?
Ledah Wolf chapter 11 . 3/9/2007
I'm going to have to agree with some of the other reviews. The scene at the end was kind of unnecessary. It's a great story up until that point, but the last scene could be taken out. Your idea of email the lemon to people was a good one, but I think it should have stayed with that.
Ledah Wolf chapter 4 . 3/8/2007
Ivan as Scion was awesome. Seriously. Ivan as an assassin. I read Sacrificial Love, but I liked Eighth Guard better. Nicely done.
J0K3RV1RU5 chapter 11 . 1/17/2007
wow i have read alot of stories on this site but this was amazing you are an excellent writer, although in a chapter you put Ivan when they didn't know it was him yet but still this was a great story and you should keep making stories.
N. Terrin chapter 10 . 8/8/2006
Dude please send me the lemon that you wrote. My email is So send the lemon ok.
random reviewer chapter 2 . 7/10/2006
...ah...well...i dont think i will read the rest of this cause i can't stand the thought of Ivan being stronger than Isaac...CHEESECAKE!
Revenial chapter 11 . 6/19/2006
dunno if u are gona read this i will watch the reviews for your answer BUT AWSOME STROY i had a bit of an iffy feeling at the end of sacrificial love but i read on all the same cus i sort of knew what was gona happen by the name of the sequal lol but this is absolutly awsome man. P.S. i usually only give reviews at the end of the stroy/stroies once i have read all of them hence the chapter this is coming from k. Brilliant story in all respects can't wait to read more of your stories relating to sheba and ivan if you have written any, nice one here and GOOD LUCK for the future.

Revenial

R.S.V.P in the reviews section i am watching out
shadowofthedeep chapter 11 . 5/14/2006
this story was great. so was the prequel to this story. i really suggest that you write sequel to this story.
N. Terrin chapter 11 . 5/4/2006
This was a great sequel to sacrifical love and it was just funny watching him get slapped by everyone.

p.s:what was in that potion that turns people horny?
HotSauce202 chapter 10 . 2/12/2006
Who else knew who Scion was in the paragraph he was introduced?

I'll say this: The writing was 6.8/10.

The characterization was 6.5/10.

The plot was 7/10.

Overall, it was about 7/10.

The only thing that I didn't like was the last chapter. Showing a graphic scene of sex was just not called for by the demands of the story. I respect what you've written aside from the last chapter.
anonymous chapter 11 . 4/28/2005
Great story. I just wanted to comment, in chapter 7, you have the following paragraph:

"Give me your hand. I'll remove it for you." She lifted up her hand and Ivan took up his now bloody knife, Ivory. Channeling some psyenergy, he brought the knife down on the ring, effectively breaking it into two. "Let's go."

You use the name Ivan, but at this time you still haven't revealed him to be Ivan. You just might want to change that.
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