Reviews for The Beast Within
BendFire chapter 13 . 10/20/2006
I feel so bad for raven...Damn Beast!

Kitsune Within

That doesn't mean I wont be avidly waiting for the next chapter
Bhill62 chapter 13 . 10/19/2006
This is still a great story and you have done well. My only request is that if you are really gonna have Beast Boy continue to fight the Beast than make his resistance stronger. This is dark and if you were to end it here I would be pissed but since I know you won't do that I like it. Dark is sometimes good, keep up the good work.
SkyAngel429 chapter 13 . 10/19/2006
Good chapter. Poor Raven. This is a great story. And I think that the added bit of interaction between Star and Robin was good - I was wondering what everyone else was doing. Looks like no one else is coming to her rescue. It looks like BB is starting to fight back. Wonder if he'll even be able to, or if he'll be able to do anything to start to repair the damage he caused. Please update again soon, I can't wait that long!
XnvrmoreX chapter 13 . 10/19/2006
Thank God you added the rob/star fluff or i would've died with all the scary bb/rae stuff...
El Queso de Malicioso chapter 13 . 10/19/2006
Like I said before, one to two more chapters of this single event. I hate to say that it actually is getting a bit boring. But, you saved it a bit by making BB finally start to fight back. But, at the most, you added one more chapter of this single event with it still remaining comfortable.

In summary, I truly hope that this particular situation ends before chapter... let's be liberal here... 16. I don't know. I'm not trying to say that this is how you HAVE TO do it. I'm just saying that it's a good idea. Why can't I think of a way to say this that doesn't make me sound like a Communist dictator?

Oh, what the hell. It has all the good qualities that I have always associated with this fic thus far and I look forward to seeing what you do with it next. There! Finally got to the nice part.

Good job and good luck.
Loki14 chapter 2 . 10/19/2006
Oh my god, I recognise the writing in this fic...Have you ever, by chance, written a Teen Titans fanfic called "A Raven Like No Other"? Or possibly something similar to that? It was my all time favorite but it was taken off the site awhile ago I suppose.

If you did write that one, think I ya might be able to email me a copy? _;;
ShadowDog34 chapter 12 . 10/17/2006
wow im speachless.. this is great..
Amara-chan chapter 12 . 10/17/2006
This story is fantastic! It's on my favorites list, and I check it daily to see if it has been updated. A bit sad I know but alas...update as soon as you can! :)
teentitansraven2 chapter 10 . 10/15/2006
keep it up dude you have not failed me yet dude. lol
Pyrobee chapter 12 . 10/14/2006
What...? No...Please hurry with an update!
El Queso de Malicioso chapter 12 . 10/13/2006
In the immortal words of Raven herself: "Whoa..."

That was interesting, but I just have a small bit of advice for you. Don't let this single event go on for too much longer. A brilliant fic can be destroyed by sticking on a single event for too long. I'd say it has about another chapter... two at the very most left in it before it kills itself.

Other than that slightly unpleasant statement, this is still a dmaned good fic and I can't wait for you to continue once more.

Good job and good luck.
warprince2000 chapter 12 . 10/13/2006
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
Fallen Dragonfly chapter 12 . 10/12/2006
Esh, didn't hold back on anything did you.

But you told the truth, what pain someone can suffer...

I would know, I suffer like that, I feel just like he does...

Suffer the pain, fall to the darkness.

Falling, falling, fallen...
samurai-lapin chapter 12 . 10/12/2006
this is intense...i really like this story a lot. im glad u updated somewhat quickly!
Chris Johnson chapter 12 . 10/12/2006
Your story is a very good one and you are just keepin pumpin out more and more chapters that are of very good quality. I think that the confrtation between the two could have been more intense, maybe somethin like when Raven asks Beast Boy to stop it he could have said, "What and have you continue to treat me like shit?" or somethin along those lines. Thats just my opinion. Keep up the good work, we need to continue to update more and more good BB/Rae fics.
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