|Reviews for Day 14|
| A Midsummer chapter 12 . 5/27/2013
Hmmm, I've always thought the current events of the series have too much emotional baggage to deal with swiftly in a fanfic so I seek out pieces from the Pre-Shippuden to Mid-Shippuden timeline. The doujins were gems, I tell you. Team Seven in all its glory. It made me nostalgic, managing to make me touch the Naruto DVDs I had to watch it all over again. Because there wasn't constant mindfuckery involved. Good old days. Real happy days of innocence, rid of heartache and betrayal.
2004? Almost a decade. I was like, a snot nosed brat at this point who may or may not have a crush on the brooding little Uchiha (Blue dark hair and cool red eyes? sold!). Which died rather quickly since the infatuation of a certain elusive and deceased Yondaime was at its peak but I digress. How time flies...I haven't been a big fan of the series, often snubbing the others for being Narutards. Ironic considering I acted like a disdainful Sasu-chan.
But I'm glad I managed to burrow such a precious discovery in a pile of junk. *whistles* Ahhh, to think it had all my important OTPs too. Even InoShika, which is a rare joy to be found this days, tolerating the rival ship ShikaTema aside. A miraculous find. I was beginning to despair for finding a good read in my current obsession (e.a. sasusaku). Good to know that my desperate measures paid off.
12 chapters, actual genuine drama, great characterization and none of those facepalm inducing wallbangers (tvtrope term for plot holes that makes the traumatized reader go into a comatose mode of sheer disbelief). Thumbs up and a hundred rated five stars for you, dear author. This should have been already hitting thousands in regards to reviews but nope, FFN's stupid hierarchy of fools strikes once again. *sigh* This is why I hate epics. They cheat.
| A Midsummer chapter 10 . 5/27/2013
Gah! Their incorrigible. But this is why I like them. The myriad of complex shit they put with themselves.
| A Midsummer chapter 9 . 5/27/2013
I can't help but be surprised by this old age fics. Holy shit, an actual plot! *facepalm* Yeah I know but who could blame me? I was drowning on a sea of overused clichés and as much as my perverted mind approves Lemons/Limes. Its a good thing I started backwards then. I was losing hope for sasusaku. A good read in my OTP I mean.
| A Midsummer chapter 8 . 5/27/2013
Even the dry humor was enough to pacify depression. *shakes head* But really, you emotionally inept fool, you just have to write a love letter, yes it is silly sasuke, as your last will.
| A Midsummer chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
Ahahaha! Poor Naruto.
| A Midsummer chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
Ohhh, I can't gahahaha! pffffft.
I knew Sasuke-kun would misunderstand, that dork. When she said hold me, silly Sasu, she meant it literally. Then there just has to be the discussion of sexual reproduction after that with Ino and Shikamaru. Poor Sakura-chan.
| snowrabbit2012 chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
I was surprised to see the 'araw ng mga hangal' there! Hahaha.
Nice st0ry, and very very amazing. This is my 2nd time reading this. I just love it!
Kudos p0. Gandaa
| Oliv'-'Firecracker chapter 12 . 11/14/2011
I actually had a dream about the ending of this fic(after I read it of course). But I can't remember it now... I loved it! You write really well!
| GalanthaDreams chapter 12 . 8/19/2011
I'll definitely need to keep an eye on this. :)
| Blue Aidelle chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
More stories to come. :))
| cimpleCC chapter 12 . 6/16/2011
Ok. Overall the story was good. I was confused alot of the time though. Mostly because of the too much detail and something that had nothing to do with story, for example, the dream about Sasuke as a farmer? Very weird.
The ending was horrible for me. I wanted to know the sex of the child and how Sakura's and Sasuke's life would turn out to be. But oh well I guess.
But I was still induced with this story. You did alot better writing this story then I would, so I thank you. :) Keep writing please.
| sasusaku lover chapter 12 . 5/29/2011
your narration was good and i really enjoyed reading it but i think, if am not wrong you're a shikaIno fan, there was too much shikaino, the sasusaku was good but thers wasnt that romance and a tad bit of too much conflict. other wise it was great. thanks for your dedication in finishing it. you might want to also add a bit detailed physical activity. you know what i mean. (wink)
| zunaira ghazal chapter 12 . 2/20/2011
its amazing! :)
just a lot of detail!
| Kaze and Kiba chapter 11 . 11/22/2010
Great story. It was really a surprise the way you wrote the battle and the pregnancy. I really liked that and that Sasuke found out the same time as her. The only thing I would have liked to see at the end was a little one year later paragraph to wrap it up but it was still a great tale. I like your writing style.
Thanks for the story,
| Kaze and Kiba chapter 3 . 11/21/2010
Oooh, your writing is wonderful. I love the banter between Ino and Shika and Sak. Ino really is a genius too, just not the same kind of one Shika is, hehe. And it looks like Sakura remembered that thing niggling at the back of her mind, ahaha.
Thanks for the story.
I'm glad I found your work.