|Reviews for For the Love of a Well Known Rock Icon : Part II|
| quiahuitl chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
| Dr FooFoo chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Again, nice job. Suggestion: Break it into paragraphs, based on the ideas expressed. Also, you can add chapters to existing stories, so you might want to add this as a second chapter to your first one.