|Reviews for Slytherin Prophecy|
| Angela Narcissa Malfoy chapter 15 . 2/28
I loved this!, really sweet and a nice read on a cold night :3. Only a few things(just cause I'm a grammar freak, it doesn't make sense since I suck at that. Lol) Severus's middle name is Tobias. Ron's is Billius and Dray's is Lucius. Hahaha, sorry bout that. You probably already got some of these from others but it not;now you know :3.
Later lovely, have fun with story's and keep at it :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/27
Hey there... Ive just red your Story and I think that the plot is fantastic. I adore it!
Most of the time your writing manner is good, but I have also something to criticize(it is not to offend you only to show you what I think you could do better )
in your Story there is the Moment where Harry and draco met each other again. they hated each other very passionately and from one sentence to the other they are attracted to each other... its like... Hey I hate you ... now I love you... please I want a child from you ! ok it is very drastic now but to me it occures like that... bt mostly your Story was good
| beautyfan0102 chapter 15 . 1/3
Excellent story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over
| beauty12 chapter 15 . 1/1
good story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over. Happy new year.
| Chakahlah chapter 15 . 12/4/2013
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/20/2013
Richard? Such a muggle name. Loved the story. It was so cute
| LunarFay chapter 13 . 6/16/2013
The emotions were much better in this chapter.
Really cute, it is getting a little, what's the word I'm looking for? I'm just going to go with silly, cheesy. But I can deal I'm only a chapter to go.
Well anyways I'm hoping the baby's a girl! Cus I know Draco would have her looking like a princes! X3
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/15/2013
The story is cute, but I kept getting the something was off. Like you were just stating facts. Reading this chapter I realized, where is the emotion. Harry walked up to a seen of blood & his lovers wand & there was no panic no dread.
Harry left the common room worrying his lip. Draco could be anywhere. Taking a moment, the brunet decided to go to their favorait spot on the lake first. His mind wandered to his fair lover & the child growing within him. Their child. This thoughts puting a spring in his steps, Harry hastened his pace. As he approached the lake, his lovers name on his lips, harry suddenly froze.
Why was there blood everywhere!
"Draco!" Harry shouted, the panic thick in his voice. He ran in to the clearing hoping to fine that it was not Draco's blood littering the earth., but his hopes were quickly shattered as he spotted the blonde's wand on the ground. Next to the wand a stone perched over a sheet of parchment.
See? I'm not changing it I just added emotion. Harry's happiness at the prospect of his future with his lover & child. Then the dread of loseing what he's world.
I know I might have spelling & grammar mistakes, I wrote it on my cell & didn't read it over :/
Anyways I hope that example helps you in your writing :3
Good luck :3
| Weirdbunni chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
I'm sorry but this is all so out of character. You got them together in the 3rd chapter? No fighting or anything. Then straight up asking if they wanted to date. I am sorry but i cant continue.
| beauty0102 chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
This was good liked it alot.
| Laesk chapter 15 . 3/16/2012
a good story. thank you
| Ichi-chan1 chapter 15 . 1/28/2010
awesome story lov it awesome plotline lov it too keep up the awesome work again lov the story
| Z-L.B chapter 15 . 12/7/2009
Absolutely wonderful! Just the pick me up I needed while battling this horrible cold! ZLB
| Lientjuhh chapter 15 . 6/29/2009
I like it.. well done.. :)
| loretta537 chapter 15 . 6/18/2009
this was a nice story