Reviews for Ten on the Run
Guest chapter 15 . 3/19
Ridiculous story you make steph sound like a moron who gets bossed around by ranger and its so ooc its stupid!
Sakana chapter 18 . 7/8/2014
I thought that overall this was a good story, except at times it felt like you left out lines. All of a sudden you would day that Ranger said, then Steph would reply, but we do not know what the conversation intailed. I felt like I missed something important within the story.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/6/2014
WHAT'S UP WITH ALL THE BR BR /BODY.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/23/2013
funny thought, Tank as a hairdresser...

Break . love Les' wicked humor.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/23/2013
dinner went surprisingly well.
i thought for sure Frank was going to say something to Ranger.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/23/2013
bummer now terry is in on everything too.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/23/2013
oh boy Steph, Lula and Ranger shopping at the mall.
This should be interesting.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/23/2013
lol knowing les he'll have them playing Mr. and Mrs.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
ok not the apartment on 7.

I cannot believe some of the stupid stuff happens to her, a grown woman...she fell out of the tub.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
the batcave is probably the pent house.

it seems like some sentences were missing words.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
oh good chapter.
who started the fire?
why were shots fired?
Guest chapter 4 . 8/23/2013
hmm who could be yelling?
what's going on?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
i wonder what the job will be.
Steph got her skip with hardly no trouble. good.
carrotmusic chapter 18 . 1/8/2013
Fascinating story. Sort of fun to think of Terri and Tank as an item. Thanks for sharing and take care.
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