|Reviews for Twilight of the Dawn|
| TransformersBeeFan chapter 12 . 2/22
Oh please in the name of Kami update! I don't care if you're dead, update! I beg of you have to finish this! I know its been like 4 years and I know life is rough (believe me, it took me a full year to update one of my stories) but PLEASE!...ps this is the greatest Dragon Ball Z story of Piccolo ever! Like in the whole universe!
| Chem-Death chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
It's strange to see Goku ... normal. Behave normal like regular people.
| ShireWulf chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I read all 12 chapters today, and dearly hope that there will be a 13th!
| Ms Llewellyn chapter 12 . 5/26/2011
I love it! And I cant wait till you continue - oooo when's the next post? Damn story is exciting, muahahahahaha, piccolo is going to kick daimao's ass. bye!
| Elieare chapter 12 . 5/21/2011
Gee I was so busy with college I barely noticed this chapter came out XD. Glad you found a chance to write again. This chapter may have been filler but it is important filler and it leaves me anticipating more. I wouldn't mind more sensory details like smells and sounds. Nothing too over the top, just a description here and there to cement the setting. Patiently waiting for the next chapter. :)
| FluffyBiscuits chapter 12 . 5/13/2011
I saw your profile. I'm really sorry about what happened to you. I wouldn't blame you if you didn't feel like finishing the fic after this. You have to take care of yourself first and not worry about what other people think.
| Jason9000 chapter 11 . 4/1/2011
Once again I forgot to add a story to my favorites...ugh stupid button I thought i pressed it already.
| Jason9000 chapter 12 . 3/31/2011
Not bad not bad. I like this a lot. Showing that Daimao is still alive in a sense. Hmmm...this gives me an idea. One that I may not do for a while but it involves a certain Namekian, his sire, and another demon we know.
| FluffyBiscuits chapter 11 . 5/19/2010
This was freaking amazing. Good luck on finishing your master thesis and getting married.
| Volcanic chapter 11 . 5/12/2010
YESSSSSS! An update! Great chapter and I hope you continue agian soon! I really love your writing!
| chikyu chapter 11 . 5/11/2010
Are pigs flying? Seriously they must be cause you’re BACK! *little enzone dance* Really loved this one. It didn't advance the story much, but oh-boy did it up the bar on what they all are going through! (Personally loved the side scene between Krillin and Yamcha.) I've seen the Covers; they are some of Piccolo's best illustrations. Glade you brought that in. May I guess and say it was Ma Jr., his original self, who was yelling at/pleading with him from his mind to take the power, for self preservation, a little evolution of, or return to the base-form? Or was it a more sinister further into the parlor? He's got so many literal parts to his personality and mind, its dynamic, and that's part of the reason I love the character so much. Can't wait to read the next bit, (Yay they killed the spider! Cr#p! It was just errand boy!) and hopefully it will be before another year goes by. OH, btw, happy b-day to Pic, intentional or not you got this out for it!
| Hellysion chapter 11 . 5/11/2010
Ehhh, another chap, hoorayyy! I love Piccolo, and you portrait him so well :D I have been reading this for years it seems (wait... it has been years). But Im so happy you continued it, really, and hope to read more soon,
| Elieare chapter 11 . 5/10/2010
Yay update! Another great chapter, I can't wait to see what you have Daimao throw at Piccy next _
| Larania Drake chapter 10 . 7/21/2009
Well, I recently found this and I hope you continue. It is quite rare that I find a story that explores the potential of the other characters besides Goku and Vegeta! Please continue!
| FluffyBiscuits chapter 10 . 5/22/2009
This story rocks. College can be a bitch with its demanding classes. Look forward to later updates.