Reviews for Smooth Operator
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
BEAUTIFUL so sensual ;))
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
awsome
elizabeth chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
That was no fair. It would be a lot better if you had told us in deatils that they made love and told us every single kiss, push,word, etc of every single second of it.
Genseeker25 chapter 2 . 10/7/2010
outstanding. I don't what else to say.
Gotham Girl 101 chapter 2 . 7/26/2009
HOW OLD ARE THEY HERE? O_0' -twitches-
shinecsc chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
omg! HOT! AWESOME!

hope they wore protection!
JimmyNeutronFan chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
ok very physical! but i love it its so cute at the end!
Chloe chapter 2 . 2/12/2009
oh i love it!
david chapter 2 . 10/4/2008
WOW THAT WAS HOT I COULDN'T BELIVE WHAT I WAS RIDDING NICE ONE
brotherskillerssoldiersbks chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
nice they getting freaky
FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 2 . 2/15/2007
Very good, very cute. I really liked that one. Um, didn't you say that they were freshmen though? A little young don't ya think? Good anyway!
RedRoseRebel chapter 2 . 8/25/2006
Really good story! :)
Darth Vortex chapter 2 . 6/8/2006
This is not a mere trash, this is horribly shitty trash!

It is a shame for a JN Fan to read this shit!

BUH!
Titan Lover chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
EW! That was completly and utterly stupid. And they were WAY OOC. This is Trash.
greg9570 chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Mostly, I can't picture them acting like this, but from a stretch, I actually can see them doing this in an alone situation. That is pretty screwy. Your story is in a league of its own.
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