|Reviews for Trying|
| AllegroAssai chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
That was beautiful, well-written and brilliantly constructed. I loved the dialogues and how well you portrayed everyone who tried.
"Don't touch me, Remus," he snapped, snatching his hands away and hugging them to his chest. "I'm a monster."
"Splendid," said the other wizard, lightly. "Me too."
And that was just AWESOME!
| shakespeare's sister chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Again, this is a repeat visit but this fic is so damn good it demands rereading.
| hooray4david chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
that was beautiful...and i loved every word.
| Dust Particle chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
WOW that was incredibly good. aw. feel good ending.
| Murgy31 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
That was fabulous!
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
I wish that Rowling hadn't hated Snape so much and let him have a life after giving so much to everyone. He deserves to have a real life and someone who actually loves him (Oh, and Remus should admit to trying to eat Snape _twice_, counting PoA).
But of course, even Malfoys are allowed to live in preference to someone who gave up everything for the Order, and received basically nothing in return.
| snarky Beth chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Well, erm, I found this story and thought it'd be interesting. It was very good, emotional and a great plot with some interesting events. The fox was a cute idea _ The thing is though, I wasn't expecting it to become /, / is just not my cup of tea, and so I was a bit offed by it. HOWEVER, despite that fact, I still found it to be a great story. Well done!
And now, I'm looking at the catigory it is in, I'm spotting the word 'romance' and I'm thinking 'how could I have missed that?'
Ah well, I still enjoyed this story!
| TwistedLilBarbie chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
what a sweet story. _ some parts made me giggle...
| deruebersetzer chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
*sob* this is beautiful!
| hotcocoalatte chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Though I'm not into slash, i really liked this fic! Great job!
| iimagineyou chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
I like the way that each of the attempts are sectioned off with titles, the last one "Severus Snape tried" being my favourite.
| TheDeathChamber chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
That was pretty and sweet. I especially like the "I, Severus Snape, did what had to be done." and the ending phrase. Nice piece.
| ureima chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I read this I think in LJ or somewhere. I've always loved this story. Especially the line:
"I, Severus Snape, did what had to be done."
I hope you write more SS/RL. And I hope you weren't affected by the blasts in London a few days ago.
| Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
An absolutely fantastic work; I misted up while reading it. I only wish you'd made the last section into additional chapters. ;) If you're not already in the SnapeAngst C2, I'm putting this story there! Looking forward to reading the rest of your HP stories...
| Rae Roberts chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Aw, I liked that a lot. Just an excellent story all around.