Reviews for Dancing in the Rain
The Candy Cane Forest chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
That was so good... and so sad! I almost cried!
dream.sequins chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
*sniff* I'm still crying as I write this review. It was such a sad and wonderful story. Wonderfully sad.
anime gurl chapter 2 . 6/24/2005
that was one of the best fanfics ive ever read! it was really great! i like it a lot because its very original. i havent had so much fun reading a story in a while. so THANK YOU so much! wonderfully written.
Final chapter 2 . 6/17/2005
Another fine peace of work! *Claps* I'm really suprised that the number of reviews isn't A LOT higher. But oh well, those people don't know what their missing out on.
Lady Sandrilene Evenstar chapter 2 . 1/10/2005
Very, very nicely written, as usual. It's a beautiful story...I loved the ending. Talon and Katma are so sweet! Great, great job. Keep writing!
Avalon Estel chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
You know, I just commented, but I have something to ask. Have you read "Fahrenheit 451"? Katma seems so much like Clarisse! Oh, I love your writing! I'm gonna go read something else by you now!
Avalon Estel chapter 2 . 10/15/2004
My goodness, this is beautiful. I cried when Katma died! You are an amazing writer. I can imagine every image. Please continue writing. I would give constructive criticism, but there's none to give!

Avie
Tris the weatherwitch chapter 2 . 9/9/2004
oh my gods. do you have any idea how wonderful and absolutely moving your writing is? i hope you do. as i am typing this, the tears are falling *very* freely. how can someone be so good at writing, so inspiring? i love your very human portral of the charaters. you write with a beauty and grace i've seen few match. i truly hope you continue to post on ff.n.
WhiteWings88 chapter 2 . 9/6/2004
Wow. You really have a way with words. I really like how you go into such depth with the characters. Nice job!
Pasht chapter 2 . 9/4/2004
Oh wow... that's was so sad and magnificently written. I started crying! You know what would make a good scene near the end, after Katma's death? Malon standing in the rain, exactly as her mother did.

Also, what caused Katma to die? Just general illness? The doctor should probably diagnos her, before he says she's going to die.

I absolutely love this! A perfect "companion" to the story of Link's parents! And I love the foreshadowing! Great work!
nulled chapter 2 . 9/4/2004
Oh :'(

It's 1:33 AM...and I don't know if I'm just sensitive or not, but I really have tears in my eyes. I just want to go to my mom and hug her!

...But she's sleeping...

Aw...that little scene with Malon and her mom, saying how Epona should love her love too...it's so sweet because Epona does love Link _ And eek, the way you described Darvin...he's exactly like how you described him in this story in your Bloodlines book...aggressive o_O;;

This story was probably the only story ever that actually made me have tears in my eyes...it made me think of my mom :'(
nulled chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
I've never actually read a fic about Malon's mom. All I can say is...I've never actually pictured how she'd be like...and reading this does sort of make Malon's mom sound like she would be the kind of person how you wrote her as..._ P.S. I used to be 'Star Sage'...let's see if I can keep this penname...

*sigh*

P.P.S I thought that after you finished Life as a Hero you'd leave fanfiction...since before that you were sort of on a short hiatus...but I'm glad you're not! _
Lizai chapter 2 . 9/4/2004
This has got to be the saddest story of yours I've ever read, and yet I still love it. Why is it that everything you write is so awesome?
SeaSaria chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Cool. I love all your works! If you have the time will you read mine?
link no miko chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Ohmygoshadorable! *dies and melts into a puddle* So fluffy...so good... Talon is adorable in this. And Katma is so cute and strange (in a good way), and I like her view of the world very much. Especially her view on people being nice.

Ohmygosh I loved this.

I love how you go into character backgrounds like this. The only thing I'm confused about was the Queen Alea thing. Was this before her and Churo decided they weren't getting married? Or am I screwing up names... But I was pretty sure Alea wasn't the one what married Churo.

Other than that confusion though, ohmygosh. Just... I really loved it. The writing and the portrayal of Talon as someone who was kind of stiff, and then he gradually became looser throughout the story, and you know from the game that he's a very carefree individual. Knowing Katma had that effect on him (even if I didn't see it completely in the story), is such good characterisation.

Thank you for this fic!
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