Reviews for Born to be Torn
geuss chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
I loved it.
alie g chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
MORE PLEASE!
vinnie the geek chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
WOAH! Raven on a really bad day. Good job. Keep writing. Vin, the ancient geek
Ace Grey Manx chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
The Honest Kid, The Unchangable youth, The Little Philosopher... you've stopped the signatures.

Anyway, keep it up. So far I have found no trace of OOC-ness within your works and they all manage to capture the imagination brilliantly. I'd have to say that you're the best Raven poet out there.

Ok... I'll stop gushing.
starpana chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
its ok childlike. You think I have a sence of humor? must find pen. i have to find a pen. nope thats not a pen. ha i fond a pen. no really i did. well its more of a marker. bye.
Raventhedarkgoddess chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Once again, great job. I love your poems, power and beauty to the dark parts of life.
Faith Wesley chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
It's a good poem, very depressing. I like how you mentioned Raven's mirror in the poem.
JH1992 chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I love bloody and dark! Great poem!
Archer of the Titan chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Um... it was kind of bloody, and dark. BUT Great poem. Write more