Reviews for On My Mind
Werewolf String Quartet chapter 8 . 9/21/2009
no! don't make it the last chap!
Isolde Eris chapter 8 . 5/14/2007
Please continue with it!
Anna Potter Black chapter 8 . 7/23/2006
Have James turn Lily into a vampire and not have them die! I loved the story! :) Is Lily a vampire?
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 8 . 7/13/2006
NO! Please don't make this the last chapter. The story is going really well and now you have a chance to write about their relationship.
BrucasplusSkate chapter 8 . 5/24/2006
does this make lily a vampire?
Hilaryjojo chapter 8 . 2/19/2006
I thought that that was great. I think you should write more.
rita and sarah chapter 8 . 8/26/2005
u need more chapters! its good but it needs more chapters! it's a very inventive idea and we want to know how lily's parents react.
LaDiiCoMpLeX chapter 5 . 3/11/2005
I like it. It's cute and for a minute I forgot he was a vampire.
CrazedLunatic chapter 8 . 1/29/2005
no last chapter, dumb butt! Very very good!
miss confused chapter 8 . 1/25/2005
no dont let that b the last chapter!i lik this story a lot. but could you work on slayer
Black Kat64 chapter 7 . 1/14/2005
I've been waitting forever i want more and it so dose not suck what i write sucks.
missmee chapter 7 . 1/12/2005
Reviewing! And it dosn't suck, well I like it! Hope you hurry!
Me chapter 7 . 1/10/2005
MORE! pleez! this is a gr8 story! please write more really soon!
BB chapter 7 . 1/10/2005
hm i like where this is going but maybe you should really try harder to make your chapters longer...kk?
Marguerida chapter 7 . 1/9/2005
Short, but good. Can't wait for a new chapter
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