|Reviews for Not All Monsters are Demons|
| Dwwar26 chapter 8 . 9/11/2004
It's a good storie keep it up . When are you going to add more chapter's
| Marz1 chapter 8 . 9/10/2004
Arm wrestling the sport of kings truely. great chapter, but when are they goign to get near the killer? will there be another victim soon? When is buffy goign to beat up a bad guy? update!
| iscariot chapter 8 . 9/10/2004
I'm really enjoying this [your best work to date]:
Possibly the best characterisation of Buffy I've read in a long time. Nice to see you playing her off against Stabler, while I like Eliot as a character, sometimes his patronising attitude on the show drives me nuts thus Buffy's humiliation of him went down well; but please, don't make him her whipping boy.
Also impressed with your characterisation of Wong; that you're rounding him out somewhat allows for him to be far more believable that he often is on SVU.
Finally, yay for Tutuola and Munch, neither gets the attention they deserve on SVU - Munch was always fun on Homicide: Life on the Street.
| Beboppin' Betty chapter 8 . 9/10/2004
I really like this. I like what you've done with their post-Sunnydale lives; it's very interesting and believable. The interaction with the SVU guys is good, and the little pissing contest between Buffy and Stabler totally made the chapter.
| CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 8 . 9/10/2004
okay, so who is going to figure out the Summers' sisters first? My bet is on Tutuola maybe even Stabler; one of his girls could end up being a slayer potential. I can't wait for more!
| Dorothy4 chapter 8 . 9/10/2004
Elliot, Elliot, Elliot. When will you learn that you can't be the protector of the world. Buffy already has that job. Very good characterizations. I like that Fin got she was hunting. Send more soon.
| phoenix83ad chapter 8 . 9/10/2004
Wow. I really am enjoying your story here. The cross between Law and Order and Buffy the Vampire Slayer is certain interesting to read. After alloff because the shows are so different apart and yet you merge them together with suprising ease.
You've done an excellent job of creating a crime that fits into both worlds, keeping the bizarre feeling of Buffy but the complex and scientific aspects of L&O:SVU.
And your characterization is dead on for all the characters. Loved the arm-wrestling scene, since it definently took Stabler down a notch.
But I wonder about the Slayer and Key being involved in a police investigation. Sure it's an unnofical capacity, but if they botch something up, the entire case is lost. But again, they aren't actually running the investigation. They're giving clues and letting the police follow as needed.
I look forward to an update. I very much want to know how they handle the rest of the case.
| nascar girl chapter 8 . 9/10/2004
Wow! You have capturd Stabler & Benson to a T. And I can see Buffy challenging him to arm wrestle, something, non-violent to prove her point. This is so good. And thank you for toning Buffy's attitude down, it works better. And of course Dawn is great with the "I told you so like line", hee he, keep up the good work. We want more. ty
| Marz1 chapter 7 . 9/10/2004
so is buffy going hunting then? she's already got a direction to head in, and she can like pick out all the good alleys to dump a body in and keep watch.I don't suppose they could use a tracking spell to hunt this guy down. well good chapter, update soon.
| Toras chapter 7 . 9/10/2004
Excellent story. I like how you've blended the elements of BtVS & LO:SVU. Keep up the excellent work.
| Grace chapter 7 . 9/10/2004
once again, a fantastic chapter and quick too! I hope all this cheering you on brought such quick writing. Very good and reasonable psychological profiling going on here, either you've done extensive research or you're a very gifted story teller...both are compliments btw. Flow of story is excellent, but I wonder when there will be some sort of a breakthrough? :)
| Philo chapter 7 . 9/10/2004
:) wonderful fic, at first I was reluctant to read, but that I did, I'm hooked. Two of my fave shows in one...excellent. keep up the wonderful work. Ja Ne
| elfin2 chapter 7 . 9/10/2004
I love the realistic attitudes and reactions in this story.
| CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 7 . 9/9/2004
This is so amazing! I can't wait for more!
| Dorothy4 chapter 7 . 9/9/2004
I really like this story. Not only are you using my favorite dectives from SVU, but you are doing a good job at keeping Buffy and Dawn in character. And the murder is just gory enough to be interesting. Keep sending the updates.