|Reviews for Tormented Souls|
| DJ Sharingan chapter 14 . 12/24/2007
Sorry i never got to review this chapter when it was updated. But now that i can, all i want to say is that this chapter is good.
I just hope Coral will get better soon. Tala's trying really hard to look after her in his time of need and the way you develop the relationships go so well.
| PracticalPyro chapter 14 . 10/22/2007
last year i read this story but there were about three chapters less. Ive thought of it several times but had convinced myself it was on permanent hiatus. yesterday i was searching for a new story and i come across this one i start reading it and i was thrilled especially remembering that one scene in his room. i started reading it again just for fun and when i came to the end of the chapters i had read and realized there was more, and not just a little too.i cannot explain how ecstatic i was. I read them and i am now completely infatuated with it you absolutely must update!your writing is brilliant, the story line is new and completely original. There is no reason in the world you shouldn't please! if the only reason just because i begged you I'm sure you can understand this situation.
| TouchOfChaos chapter 14 . 9/9/2007
I di dlike the Tala part but... it was too short! And you know those stories you want us to read (at the top of your chapter) I can't find them anywhere...
| Maresia Eterna chapter 14 . 9/1/2007
You know, I'll never get tired of saying this, but I absolutely love Tala and Coral. I love to see him caring for her, watching over her, making sure no harm happens to herl... The way you describe their relationship and the development of their relationship is absolutely magnificent, and a proof of how well you write.
I even dare to say I'm envious of Coral somehow, and even of Sky. It's very sweet to see that her and Kai are giving baby steps in their relationship, while everyone else is now trusting in Kai although they apparently don't like him yet. *chuckles*
I'm also very sorry for not sending you an email yet, I'll try to reply to you before monday. Just run into some problems here, but nothing serious.
See you later!
| DJ Sharingan chapter 13 . 9/1/2007
Great Chapter, there still doesn't seem to be much trust in Kai seeing as they think he might set them up but at least a certain someone still has faith in him.
Keep up the good work.
| Bluestray chapter 14 . 9/1/2007
omg...plz plz plz update!
| TouchOfChaos chapter 13 . 7/29/2007
Bah! Frickin' cliff hanger.
| PureBlackRaven chapter 13 . 7/28/2007
M... looks interesting, sounds mysterious... lol. Anyway, update soon!
| Bluestray chapter 13 . 7/27/2007
man u gotta update!
| Maresia Eterna chapter 13 . 7/27/2007
Okay, I'm soo going to lose my authority right now, but who cares?
YAY! A NEW CHAPTER! * starts dancing around the room, making some weird moves* And a COOL chapter too! *keeps on dancing* Yay!
*stops with a stern look* It took you a lot of time to update this, you know? WAY too long! I'm just glad to see this chapter now, because next week I won't be here so... THANK YOU! *quick dance move* Ahem, I wonder what's going to happen next; when you think things are going to quiet down just a tad something new happens. Usually bad too, but hey, I guess that's what makes this fic so addicting, and the cliffhangers so evil
Anyway, I'm very, very happy for being able to read this now, and I wish you good luck with all your present and future projects. I hope I'll hear from you before I leave, but if I don't, I'll leave a warning here: don't take so much time next! Kidnap your own laptop, run to a desert island, and let your fingers write down your imagination. I'm sure you'll find a way to do so in your dreams with help from the night's lullaby See ya soon!
| BedknobsAndLlamas chapter 12 . 5/14/2007
i really like this story im hoping that u will update soon, i love kai oc fics they are like the only fics that i will read coz i hate yaoi and i hate the kai and hillary pairing shes fucking tysons bitch and its not like there any other characters in the show that would be a good match for him so OC ALL THE WAY
| TouchOfChaos chapter 12 . 2/23/2007
Hey. Darn! There was no Tala/Coral moments!
| Maresia Eterna chapter 12 . 2/23/2007
*twitches and smacks SGCred on the top of her head* You know, your definition of "rotten chapter" isn't the same as mine. *sighs* Man, stop being so troublesome because this chapter IS good. And *twitches again* I see that you still haven't lost your touch when it comes to cliffhangers. I mean, seriously, that's not a place where someone should stop!
This is such a drag, because I don't know if I'll be able to wait for the next chapter! *puppy eyes* Update soon, please, please, please... Oh, and I'll answer to your e-mail today or tomorrow!
Good job as always, dear
| DJ Sharingan chapter 12 . 2/23/2007
I didn't think that you were even gonna update this story, but its a great Chapter overall.
| TouchOfChaos chapter 11 . 1/21/2007
Hello. I LOVE your story. Or the Tala parts anyway. Tala is so cute! I love his pairing! Coral and Tala are so freakin' cool! ]
Please for the love of God update soon!