|Reviews for Jump Ship|
| tofu-melon chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
Argh! Oh my god! This is so sweet I got mad at you for ending it like this! (Elli-chan punch!)Although I'm not the biggest Uke!Sanji fan, this has to be the sweetest crossover ever! Wah! How cute... Gojyo/Sanji *sigh* (gets beaten up)
| gyuumajo chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
wah... kawaii... *_* this is such a heartwarming moment. the flow of the writing, the properly placed tension (and d release of it :P), the gd ol' grammer/spelling/vocab were all well done. unlike my medium-rare ones. ~_~
some nitpickings tho:
"He was already on the verge of self-hate"- do u think self-hatred works better here? (i hope u dun think deliberately i'm being mean to u. this is constructive criticism. honestly.)
i'll try to get mine up by today or tmr. great job finishing it in record time!