Sob, sob. So heartbreaking story, but I enjoyed it enormously! I almost havn't slept tonight because I had to keep reading. Truly didn't expect the ending and I really liked the way you ended each chapter, such cliffhangers!

This story had so much promise to be great but I'm not sure which chapter made this story turn for the worst but it did. It frustrates me to no end how it turned out. But maybe you could give me permission to make a spin off on the story. Same beginning different ending, the concept is by farm amazing but the execution was just all over the place. Your Harry just sounded like a helpless teen always not knowing what to do and never doing a plan without thought , slytherin my ass, he was a foolish gyrfindor. Self preservation flew out the window and what was the point? To redeem the unredeemable? Please give me permission.

Holy shit! That was an emotional roller coaster and a half! Wow. That was insane. Well done.
Keep writing, VlastaChaos

I can believe Voldemort died because... Ugh I feel so bad now

Wait... Oh my god that's it that's the end what kind of melodramatic thing oh my god seriously this is so sad... Seriously sobs tears sobs

What (? Well it was incredible i like it but it is really sad how it end well it is good either way... I want him to remember

Great. Now I am crying. thanks.
However I must applaud you for that as this is the first fan fiction that has brought out my emotions as strong as this and I have read a LOT of fan fictions.
keep up the good work!

So good. And same old manipulative Dumbledore. I don't know whether I have to be terribly sorry for Harry or Voldemort.
Your writing is good. I just got hooked to your story.

wow lot

very good indeed

shocking chapter

very good

good chapter

wow

cool