|Reviews for Faust|
| Kimnd chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
I actually quite like the world that you've made up here! It feels like somewhere I'd want to explore, and the author's note indicates that you have given this world a lot of thought. That is very important, especially in a reinterpretation of an already-established world. So good job!
I wish we could have seen more of Joey and co. As it stands, it seems more like 'a reason for Ryou to sell his soul' rather than a legidimate decision. I mean... Ryou's a nice guy, clearly, but... selling your soul for your friend? That seems a little extreme. I feel like examining that decision would really have lent more weight to Ryou's decision.
The scene where Ryou actually signs his soul away is some excellent world-building, though. And Mai is hilarious. As is Bandit Keith! Both excellent re-interpretations of existing characters.
| 123 chapter 20 . 3/30/2014
Ah... It's not really clear if you're still updating from this story or your profile, but I do hope you are. Anyway, I really, really love this story. Some of it is definitely a bit confusing at times, but everything starts to make sense as inidividual parts come together to make the whole picture. I pretty much read this thing start to finish and I loved every second. You did a very good job of intertwining different plotlines with the different groups. I love the way you portray all of the characters, but I especially love Bakura, Ryou, Mana, and Malik. The world you created is genuinely amazing, and I hope that I'll be able to read more about it in the future. Well, now I'm off to do a more thorough checking of your profile and other stories. If you're still there, I really hope I'll be able to follow this until the end!
| cookie chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
I...am really confused. So far, I understood some bits of the story but the cities and mentionings of war and bombing are a tad confusing- OK a LOT confusing. Its great and I hope the situation will be explained in the future. And Im so jealous of you! Your capability of writing long chapters is utterly amazing. XD I can barely write 6-8 pages for a chapter, but you are simply amazing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Gah! Stupid review button and touch phone (swears in her native language)! Sorry for the quick and rude and accidental departure. As I was saying, I guess I was expecting a bit more toughness and defience on ryou's part
But nah, this is OK too I guess. And bakura was devilish and flirty, I expected nothing less on his part XD
| cookie chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I can't really tell you how the beginning of the story confused me, especially with the upcoming flashback and then ryou somehow in the underworld appeared right after that. The storyline and plot are great and original. Although, I personally imagined for ryou to be quite, but also defiant towards everyone around him -.- One look at baker and he already turned pansy (no offence and did I spell that right
| 00Midnight00 chapter 20 . 4/27/2013
Please update this story!
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/20/2013
Great story! I wish I had read it before..
Bakura is awesome!
| winnie chapter 20 . 7/13/2012
hey, here my response when i read this cliffhanger (...and when i read this all in one day too D: ) :'' ...no...No...noo..NOOOOO! '' worst time for a cliffhanger! i thought that this was the grand finale but noo...argh! its been .. what..3 years? verrry far away from months! the hiatus has passed! ... aanyways.. i really enjoy reading the fanfics where it includes angels and demons :D but, i haven't really found alot, and fewer complete (1? or 2?..maybe i haven't read enough...:D)or this long.
Yami met Mokuba ...I am 110% sure of it!
I loved all of your disclamers, especially this one :
Disclaimer: Saying Yuugiou belongs to us is like saying Bakura is ugly. Don't you ever say that again!
:D... I'm a Bakura fangirl anyway :D
aanyways, there was the occasional,''Ha! I knew it!'' Which if i was in a computer lab or a library.. people would have looked at me strangely..and then there were the unexpected...every time something unexpected happened, it blew me away at how you wrote it. And about Bakura's name, did you make that up yourself?cause if you did, wow, to be honest the reason his name was Bakura never actually popped up in my brain :)
poor Ryou :( he swallowed up his sister?...who was also part of Bakura? only his dad is normal:(
awwww Bakura actually had cats?
It also occurred to me that the angels acted more like demons, walking into the demon territory, searching them and attacking so many, while the demons had more heart, then..well a demon should have :) all in all i loved this... i just hate to see a cliffhanger when we are so close to the grand finale! oh and, Screw the rules, I have this story to read!
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 19 . 6/11/2012
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 18 . 6/10/2012
"Dog, eh?" said Marikku from the doorway. "Hi, Bakura; you look like shit. Hi, Isis. What's this about killing me?"
"Mutt," said Kaiba, sounding exasperated. "What are you doing now?"
I'm starting to wonder what they'd do if someone threw a Chihuahua at them.
(It's no wonder you have 600 reviews, though it's murder to read these long chapters.)
| Shiera137Faustus chapter 19 . 4/20/2012
600 comment! whoot!
now i dont trust isis...
| Shiera137Faustus chapter 20 . 4/20/2012
like u said, only a few chaps from the grand finale. plz, oh plz finish it!
| darkvampiregirl13 chapter 18 . 4/15/2012
lol, bakura, you look like shit.
the first thing marik says is bakura, you look like shit.
| darkvampiregirl13 chapter 16 . 4/13/2012
lol, you have a t shirt that says thanks for being a waffle?
shaitan on a pogo stick! lol, imagine yami on a pogo.
wait, so elna is literally in the minds of its people?
so yugi is afraid of darkness, but isnt afraid of 'hae'? lol, thats true humor...
| darkvampiregirl13 chapter 14 . 4/11/2012
bakura... u really dont wanna live anymore, eh?