|Reviews for Last One|
| vampirebeast01 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
what?thats it?why havent u finished this story?its really good!
| Akahime88 chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
ahh. update soon. nice start. :)
| Helper chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
I like the gist of the story, but your spelling and grammar could improve. Some more description would be nice as well.
| CelticDragonQueens chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
The story is good! It made it to my faveorite list.
How many chapters are you making it?
Make sure there is more Fanta and Ryang!
| fanta-faerie chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
any chance of you finishing? it's really good...
| SerketChaos chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
wow that was awesome cough i HATE jack cough it should be a Fanta x Ryang story!Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang Fanta x Ryang! yay,Fanta x Ryang! .*
| wowie chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
wow...that was...so stimulating. golly, i have to read it again...
| Only the Ring Finger Knows chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Let me know when you write the next chapter. This is really good!
| ZoraAngel chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Funny! And so Faerie's Landingish.
| Shessy Girl chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
PLZ PLZ PLZ WRIGHT MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY ITS REALLY GREAT SO FAR! PLZ KEEP WRIGHTING! (pouting)
| Midori Hayashi chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Very good job! I think the only improvement you need to make is to slow things down a bit, and maybe add more description. Sometimes it was a little confusing to figure out where they were. Other than that, it was great! Keep up the good work. _ Midori
| aNGieVaNGo9 chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
| She-Wolfay chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
So there is going to be more right? its a great story I'd hate for you to leave it there.
| horsegal628 chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
i really like it!
| kat chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
it was long, but i just had to read it all. i want to know what happens next!