Reviews for Rain
Reikachan14 chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
'twas lovely. I enjoyed it very much.
GoingToChange chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
nice _ I luv rain... but anyway, good essay. If you want it to have more 'to the left is blahblahblah' and such... try explaining how the animals accept the rain, like "To my left I see a bird... it flusters its feathers in the rain, blah blah blah" kinda like that— I hope this helps with your essay, keep up the good work!

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KuramaandHieiever chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Wow...so short, yet so good. I could never write an essay like that -_- great job it did seem to have a deeper meaning. To me, it seems as if perhaps Youko was repenting for things he'd done in the past, and when the rain washed down on him, it was to symbolize starting anew and washing away his sins *shrugs* too early to be thinking about this U_U Happy labor day!