|Reviews for An American Trilogy|
| Yuki chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
| foreverpatron chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
Mmmm really love the story! The plot was so cute and the wedding adorable! Sorry to say this but I'm just a bit confused. Did they save rouge from candra, when did the wedding take place and why did rouge have to get married via phone. Sorry if the answer is in there but I'm a bit of an idiot. Anyways regardless of whether or not you answer me, your story was really cute. Hope you continue to keep the good work :)
| Sreia chapter 5 . 1/8/2012
For a moment there, I read 'We've arranged for a PLANET t' come an' carry y' back t' Kentucky' and I was all like O_o overkill.
Haha I'm not very good at reading accents :P
Otherwise very nice and all! Cheers
| fannut chapter 5 . 11/9/2011
Well I just finished reading this story and I just wanted you to know that I think that it is grate. I loved the way you kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. I had know idea what was going to happen until it did. That, I think, really showed what a grate writer you are. The only thing I can possibly complain about is the ending. I would have loved it if it had gone on longer to the happily ever after ending where Rogue gets saved, they beat Casandra, and have a real wedding with the whole crew! But that's idealistic me. Oh, one more thing, WHO did Bella marry?
| Flpirate305 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
I really liked your story idea, I only wished that you had gone into more details for each part or chapter. It felt to me as though you had some really good ideas and than they were rushed. I do not mean to criticize you, perhaps your story was so well written with interesting ideas that I would have enjoyed to see them in their own story. Like Remy and Rogue experiences together as friends, maybe even more information on their walk to the wedding and at the wedding. Just more in depth I guess of their developing relationship. I love the way it was written and the different characters point of views. Specifically Brother Patrick and Scott's, you really conveyed what Scott was going through and were able to bring to light a different part of his personality. I also enjoyed Rogue and Belladonna's relationship, they were great getting along. I would have enjoyed seeing more of their adventure's working together. I also would have liked to have understood Candra and her motives better. Overall, I really enjoyed your story, and would have loved to read more.
Look forward to reading from you soon, hope you have a great week
| UncommonSpirit chapter 5 . 7/22/2010
I greatly enjoyed your story. It was sweet and fun. My only complaint is that you didn't put in the rescue at the end and the confrontation with Candra. Ah well. :) I'll have to read more of your stories. :)
| AthenasHoliday chapter 5 . 2/17/2010
I'm smiling uncontrollably right now... just so you know.
You deserve a big, metaphorical reviewer-hug!
| paper.creations chapter 5 . 9/16/2009
AWE! That ones my favorite, me thinks. You can write them in love so well, while keeping them wonderfully canon. Usually Remys toned down into being this mushy, extremly emotional man who doesnt tease and doesnt flirt half as much as he should. Its nice that we get best of both worlds with you.
And I liked how you fit him into the X-Men movie world. And Brother Patrick, and how you kept flipping between past and present, internal and external dialogue, character point of views. It was a very interesting way to tell a story.
Loved it to little, bite sized pieces!
| Mirandy chapter 5 . 9/7/2009
Mate, this story was brilliant.
I really loved the monologue of scot talking to jean.. even though its purely romy, it was really nice getting scots perspective and i just loved the line "i can't afford a car either, but it's a start" 'what an amazing start'...ahh all of that gave me shivers.
Very talented writing. nice one!
hope you write some more :) x
| Allleila chapter 5 . 9/3/2009
Ahh that was such a sweet story and a very Romy appropriate wedding. Afterall they never do conventional. Can't wait to read your other stories.
| NiminariAmriath chapter 5 . 6/29/2009
wow...good and a little tragic
| hesitantdancer chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
It's so beautiful! (cries at the lovely chapter). Wow i am not only left wondering why Rogue left but what happened to a fantastic intro to what i am sure is a fantastic story.
| tfobmv18 chapter 5 . 5/26/2008
I'm gonna guess that he rescue's her and they live happily ever after, after they get rid of Julien and Chandra. I love this story. It was beautiful. Keep up the good work.
| rogueyroo chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
amazing as usual. this is my second time reading this wonderful story)
| Jackanapes chapter 5 . 1/3/2008
You get coconuts. I loved it! I wish though that you had actually put in the rescue, but its your choice.