Reviews for Slowdown
Ginkyofu13 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
This story is very beautiful between a father and daughter.
MissEccentricWriter chapter 2 . 3/29/2010
OH please do continue! I love this! Great work!
Melady101 chapter 2 . 9/14/2005
Stupendous (look a new word I probably didn't spell right ) This story is so good. And it's one of the very few Captain centered stories I've seen. Keep up the good and update soon.
May-VeggieGirl1 chapter 2 . 2/14/2005
Oh! This is nice, but just from the second chapter I can see exactly where this is heading. :p heh heh heh... it made sense from everything that Haro said and then Guneagle with the MP3 files... .; It has to do with Shute taking up too much 'space' in Captain's drive, right...? :p Heh heh... Well, I won't ruin it for everyone else. It's going great, please update soon. _; Oh, and maybe you should check out That's where I stay most of the time to post up fics.
Charon chapter 2 . 12/28/2004
ITT"SS SO SHORT! But it's SO COL! Hurry with the next chapter! A! So excited!
Neoyami chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
O. Nice fic! _
Charon chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
This is great! Mark does seem to be a little mean when he's stressed. Hurry up and continue!