|Reviews for Fly|
| Seek chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
| Dragon of Venus chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
luv the song too
| casui chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
*applauses* BRAVO THAT WAS GOOD!
| DayDreamer319 chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
lol good job i love reading your one-shots lol good job.
| Bwah-the-Grand chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
PAH. Grammar is your friend! So is coherency. IF you write anything else, I would like to see it make sense. The storyline was cliched, and the song had no relevance to the story at all. And capitlize your "i"s! BAH.
| TrinaTrina chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
Another one chapter story, another amazing story plot, and another great song! You did so good on your one-chapter stories, perhaps you should try a longer one, with multiple chapters. Of course, that's only my opinion.
By the way, I love the ending, very unique and funny.
Keep up the good works.
| Mew-Ranae chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
This is really good! you should continue it or get a new begining and write a new story if you were planning on this being a 1 chapter story! It's just a suggestion. But i don't really get the italics part, i hope that didnt offend you! But this is exellent! Great work!