Reviews for He Does Not See Her
pearl.clark.129 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
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R5inmysoul chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
Hi! I have an account, but I'm too lazy to login at the moment lol I really enjoyed your short story! I am a HUGE Peter Pan geek, like huge. And recently read a book Tiger Lily by Jodi Lynn Anderson. It seems as though you like the whole tiger lily/Peter Pan match, as do I. And so I wanted to recommend this book to you. I read all of it in a day and a half and I loved it! It doesn't really conform to the picture of Neverland that we're used to, and that made it way better for me. What's even cooler is it's told through the eyes of tinkerbell, and I don't want to give too much away but yeah you should check it out!
iputonefootinfrontoftheother chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
this was so sad... amazing though
PadfootSquared chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
It's so well written oh my gosh! It really represents how I would imagine Tiger Lily. Thanks for the great but so sad story! :')
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
This is good. I like the idea of Tiger Lily liking Peter, and I'm very happy I found this story. It's written beautifully!
Jyoti chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Beautifully written. So sad but really good.
Brown Eyes Parker chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
I was pleasently suprised to find out you and I share the same faith.

My faith is one of my greatest passions, my favorite christain holiday is Christmas/Ester (spelled right I hope.)

I like both the stories I've read so far.

I like C.S Lewis too. I hope you'll keep writing and praising God for your abilty to write.

I know I do. My father told me that writing is one of God's gifts to us. We both have to use our talents for good, and not waste them.

(my dad told that to me.)

I just wanted to tell you that.

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

Lizzie Presscott
Martha chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
This is interesting. It's an interesting idea, Tiger Lily liking Peter that way. Maybe you should write more stories lke this one.
Leigh A. Sumpter chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
This is really good ! Sad, but sweet. I feel so bad for her now.. I hope to read more from you in the near future!
Rolletti chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
This is good too Rosa. I've hardly read anything with Tigerlily as an oponent to Wendy. Great job. Once again, I hope to see you finished story of A Bit Of Salve and Soul Bonding. I'M JUST TOO EXCITED. I would really like to see Peter get it together and finally tell Wendy he loves her. Why can't guys just speak their minds. huh! lol

Chow,

Rolletti