YO. DROP THE MIC. ITS THE AXE DUDE?!

A bit lengthy piece, with somehow naive or stretched plot -sorry!- but definitely an interesting story. Most characters were accurately portrayed, I think, Sanji was more crude than I’d imagine, but I loved Usopp… How did you manage that?
Seriously, thank you for finishing it, with epilogue and all. Good work! Take care.

This was such an amazing story to read, I was in love with it. The premise was interesting and fits in with Ine Piece so well, I would have believed it was canon. Everyone was in character and got a spotlight, and the mystery was suspenseful and kept me wanting to keep reading. The end was great, wrapping up the crew’s feelings very well. Thanks for writing it.

It's such a great fic,but It's also sooooo sad...Don't quite know why but I was almost in tears reading the final chapter...

I'm not going to lie. I cried more than once.

Zoro has such a soft spot for Chopper. It’s so sweet.

This lil snake is definitely my favourite character. This was the best story I've re a d in a while, and one I'll remember. A little slow to start, but I'm glad I stayed, because that was amazing. Thank you for writing it Author~San!

Oh rip Zoro. *When to your plan goes a little TOO well*

Okay, I'm interested.

Good stuff

You have a story as you put in favorite, because you like it’s and you don’t have too much way for keep it
And you have a story, a little treasure, like your story, with nice writing, and you love it. At the moment, you just regret that there are no super/spécial favorites, just for the type of moment.
So, thank for this incredible story. Maybe you don’t have the button super favorite in the site, but I have in my heart
Sorry for my English, is not my native language
See you!

I'm so glad Zoro is back to himself. Your fics are really satisfying to read because of all the drama and nakama-feels in the story. Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us!

Holy shit, its the end already? I couldnt stop reading...and I just realized I'm crying and I feel so relieved. Though I feel that Zoro still doesn't feel as easy with the rest of the crew, he would become who he was again eventually...damn that Morgan, though. Hate him with a passion now. Almost as much as Spandam. Everyone hates that sunuvabich, anyway. But I love this story nonetheless, and I'm so glad it ended with Chopper and Luffy of all people, because its those two that have the strongest brotherly bond with the swordsman, other than Sanji if you squint with him.
Zoro's my fav character, and his loyalty is one of his most endearing traits to write about. Thank you and your partner for this reminder of just how loyal Zoro is. Though I would think he'd be even more beat-up about it.

Amazing fic! Can't believe how good it was! Every Strawhat was IC and has their spotlight! I was so impressed! Loved the Usopp and Chopper vs Zoro! Usopp was awesome! Brave, strong, resistant and wow when he got pissed hearing about what happen to Zoro! I felt chills *_* I also love the combo Sanji-Usopp-Nami vs Zoro *_* damn I have never seen such a good teamwork in a fic before! That's what you call teamwork! Just loved it so much! Especially when she stole the sword xd I totally feel like this story can fit in the original manga, it has everything One Piece like :D

I also loved the thinking moments : when you describe what each Strawhat think of the situation, their feelings and emotions and how torn they are inside having to face against Zoro! Usopp and Chopper's denial, Nami's determination to stop Zoro and Luffy's fight... my favourite was Sanji's inner fight ! Writing Zoro and Sanji's relationship is so hard cause it is quite the balance between their friendship/rivalry/whatever it relationship is! And in fics, it takes just one word to feel like 'nah Sanji and Zoro wouldn't be like this with each other' but you did an amazing job to keep them themselves ! It was a 100% then! So respect!

I just loved how no matter how pissed Sanji was at Zoro, he still couldn't fight all out against him because it would mean hurting his nakama *_* for me Zoro and Sanji are as strong as each other or Zoro just barely stronger than Sanji, so I don't think it would be that difficult for Sanji to keep up with Zoro's two swords style or even his three sword style. I would reason why Sanji would lose would be because unlike Zoro, he would not go for the killing moves - which he didn't (totally stop himself when he tried, thinking 'I can't do it' : it was so... wow) I also love the way Zoro couldn't forget about Sanji deep down : how it was important for him that Sanji fought all out or how he couldn't ignore him when fighting Luffy as Sanji was being a pain in the ass! I so couldn't stop laughing at that part! It was hilarious! I can totally understand Zoro here : Sanji was really good at being a huge pain in the ass and making a fool of himself (or actually just being himself) just to piss Zoro off xd and when Zoro just threw Luffy away to shout at Sanji to shut up was totally my favourite scene of the whole fic

The epilogue was great - I loved how everyone trusted Zoro so fast (except Chopper) and showed it to him their own way. My favourite is Usopp asking (commanding) Zoro to help him xd
I also loved Sanji's way as well (pissing Zoro off xd) and Nami *_* Nami! I love her so much! Not wanting Zoro to leave the crew and refusing his money (keeping him in her debt means keeping him close to her and the crew :p) and of course the Chopper - Zoro moments *_* so cute! I love the scene where they are both nervous around each other :) it was teary and cute at the same time. Like Chopper thought, it was ridiculous to think of those two being scared/nervous/wary of each other! I love how Chopper helps Zoro in the end. And Luffy's ultimatum was.. wow! I don't have any word for it!

Impressed at how good you wrote Luffy too! The moment he tacked Zoro away from Sanji, the way he helped Sanji up, his anger at seeing so many of his friends badly hurt, the way he gave his Strawhat to Sanji, his all-out-fight against Zoro... it was all amazing! And so Luffy-like! Especially when he shouted at his friends and told them to give Zoro his sword back cause it was their fight xd

Great story in general! Amazed ! I will review the seven deaths soon too! Read both on archive of your own but couldn't review and then you said it was on this website too :)

Upon realization that you had written Pandemonium in the Gintama archive, I had a feeling I was in for a treat. And that feeling was correct. Each chapter is well written, and the crew is spot on. The villain is believable, and the twists were satisfying to read. Especially considering how on the island its constant rain, giving it a very dreary, doom and gloom atmosphere. If I were to give any criticism, it would be that this fic ended. Haha. In all honesty, though, some chapters were hard to read, not in a 'what is even happening anymore' way, more in a 'aaaah get on with it' way. I noticed this is Pandemonium too, and it seems to be something common in the mystery section, even in the works of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. That being said, I truly enjoyed this, beyond that.

You really like rain, don't you