Reviews for Never Again
TheAwesomeCocoPuff chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
nononononooooooooooooooo how did my mokie die. whoever killed him is dead.
Severus-Snape2603 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
This was very well writen. I liked it.
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
Such a sad poem. It's brilliant!
d84 chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Damn you, u makin me want to cry.
Aquawyrm chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
That is so sad. So very, very sad. *sniff*
A.V chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
That was so sad. T.T It was pretty good though. Keep up the good work.
yugifan3 chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
wow! i really like this! your good at rhyming! not like me i suck- but i wrote a fic that is like a longer version of this only not in pome form its called Mokuba's cry for help i think you would like it!
VictoricRong chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Such a beautiful poem. It really speaks to me. It's wonderful, all I can say are comments.
Tawnykit chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
*crys* Moki, no! So sad... but so well written.
Caorann fridh Bronach chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Honestly, you call me sadistic? This poem was heart-wrenching. Truly, it touched me as I thought on how self-sacrificing Mokuba was, and yet, Kaiba did not change in the end.

No tips...I just flew through it with ease and the rhyme seemed just right. The repetition was like a hammer striking me in the heart. Every time I saw "you smiled" or some rendition of it...

Thanks so much, I am depressed. I had better go read something cheerful.
SirisDerp chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
Wow! That was good. I like your style on poem writing. :D Can't wait to read more of your works!
Saiyan Jedi chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
aww! so sad! poor Seto.
Fast-Talking Johnny chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
Very good and very sweet through its despair.
Mystical Sand chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
This was really good. Poor Mokuba and Seto though.
Jak-Daxter chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
It's so sad! Sorry I haven't been checking your stories too much,, just busy. I loved it.