Reviews for The Rise of the Dragon Lords
george17 chapter 18 . 8/19/2010
Well this sucked. I mean not really but hopefully this doesn't turn into some angsty Harry story. Doubt it but worrying about the fight here is one thing. Starting to worry about wiping Charlie's and the other otp memories is another. After all the OTP is pretty much actingy like meddlesome idiots in this story anyway.
serenityselena chapter 25 . 3/13/2010
god job ... great story :)

its been a real pleasure re-reading this story _
N chapter 5 . 1/5/2010
While the story itself is better than some, although I loathe this conflict-free Superharry stories normally, there are some rather big problems with its accuracy.

In 500 BC, the Roman Republic had not yet extended beyond the immediate region of modern Rome. There was no trace of Romans on the British Isles. The Roman occupation in Britain began AD 43. In 500 BC, Brythonic and Pictish, both celtic languages, were the languages spoken in the areas your story takes place in, though mainly the former, not English nor English with a scottish accent. You're story takes place in the iron age!

As for the described weaponry, look at the Seax; it is a primitive weapon, and that was developed a thousand years after your story. There is no way smithing techniques could produce a sword as described (which would be useless in a fight and likely injured the attacker more than the attacked), let alone someone who has no idea how to forge iron (or silver, which is easier to form but a really bad choice for a hacking weapon). But let's say that magic allowed for that to happen; how the people in the general area of the later(!) Londinium (43AD!) managed to recognise a weapon impossible to exist in that time lacks explanation. Also, pitchforks were made from wood, not iron or steel (which was not even available). I could go on, but I am not sure it makes any sense. Yours is, after all, a fantasy story, but you may want to reset it to the time of Roman Britain.
gauravmittal2 chapter 25 . 12/21/2009
a nice story
TxA-GunFighter chapter 25 . 12/17/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 24 . 12/17/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
sarah chapter 6 . 12/17/2009
bc time goes backwards :) love the story so far you can email me at
TxA-GunFighter chapter 23 . 12/16/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 22 . 12/16/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 21 . 12/15/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 20 . 12/15/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 19 . 12/15/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 18 . 12/14/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 17 . 12/14/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 16 . 12/14/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
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