Reviews for Then Came The Bachelor Party
CodeRed1682 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
seriously, i laughed so hard i was crying.
yo wuz up chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
whoa nice story i dont like lyserg but when the word drunk appeared i could not help but to wonder what would happen ad i am glad i read it awesome stuff i love drunken stories
ShuffleWriter chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
That was HILARIOUS! Especially when Marco was gonna kill Lyserg. Drunk Horo was great when he couldn't talk right. And you made me realize something...almost all of Yoh's friends have tried to kill him at one point or another. Anyway, good fic.
izumi-17 chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
you should do the girls version of this... hehe...
Lellian chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
"YES! THE POWER OF SEX ENDURES!" Horo Horo crowed.

"SHUT UP OR I'LL FUCK YOU!" Ren hollered at Horo Horo.

"… Is it me, or did that just sound wrong?" Chocolove asked.

*Winces* Bishounen can be so blunt sometimes. First point - this is the first piece of your work I ever read And I liked it. Second point - kudos to you for including Chocolove in it, he's a much unappreciated character. Third point - you rock. Simple as that. Poor Marco - there was something just so...right about putting his words in bold when he got pissy. That made me all fluffy for some reason.

Anyway, moving on to Faust and Eliza...am I the only one who seems to have noticed that for much of the series, during Shaman Fights, Faust is actually standing on Eliza's cleavage? My little sister got traumatised by that...not to mention the fact her chest seems to grow sideways. I would be very interested in seeing how the girl's party went on.
D chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
THIS FICTION SUCKS ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE OUT OF CHARACTER!

YOU SHOULD HAVE MADE LEN KILL LYSERG THEN MAKE HAO AND MARCO KISS!

LYSERG SUCKS AND NEEDS TO DIE I DON'T LIKE WINNY BRITISH BRATS!

RENLEN

RYURIO

MANTAMORTY

HAOZEKE

HOROHOROTREY

YOU CAN'T SPLL RITE OR REID.

OH EH OH EH OH EH OH EH OH EH OH EH OH EH OH EH YOUR STORY SUCKS.

ON THE BOTTOM LINE HAO/MARCO IS THE ONLY IN CHARACTER PAIRING!
Miss-Mina-Chan chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
LOL was it really.I want to see the girl's party.I'm also glad my Ryu wasn't a jerk or anything that like he usally hi Ryu!*gets kiddnapped by him.*
KeliKeli chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
0.0 Umm... That was... interesting, to say the least... Will you be putting up more chapters...? You have a talent for scaring people. I luv Horo!
Rai-Mun chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
*Nosebleeds with laughter*

Wow, that was GREAT!

*Giggles*

Horny Faust! Horny Faust!

*Blush*

Ah Ren, you're so transparent when you're drunk...

*LOL*

Baka, virgin Marco...

Please write a girls version for this!

n.n

-Rai H.G.
xXxDead.x.InsidexXx chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
PLEASE CONTINUES!
Akai Tsuki chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
OMG! That was hilarious! XD You must continue soon! Onegai!
limpet666 chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
LMAO! SHUT UP OR ILL FUCK YOU!...yeah...there's somethine wrong there...or is there? *grins*

Hehe...thanks to you I'm gonna have Ren getting drunk in one of my fanfics, dont mind do ya? *Grins* na...everyone wants to see Ren drunk...Btw I'm stealing that quote... *grins* *Hands Ren toy as bribe*

SHUT UP OR ILL FUCK YOU!
s91 but mommy I don't want to log in chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
cool, it was very funny (my Lyserg-kun) is drunk lol

loved it

but you might want to up the rateing just to be safe
Giancollie chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
Love this fic, I think you should do a girl's version too..heh..
Pantsukon chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
0 P-R-E-T-T-Y N-I-C-E! I loved that story a much! It's really well written and aww it's cute !

Marco is still a virgin? It's rare at this age, but it's cute at all cuz he want to wait for his soul sister...it's romantic _!

So...i already had wrote a Marco x Anna fic U_U...but Marco x Tamao Oo;; eh send me the website please xD
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