|Reviews for Fetus of God|
| fetus chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
i am a fetus
| MelodyReiterLee chapter 8 . 11/3/2005
Wow, this is interesting.. Good job. HUrry up and write more!
| Nightman chapter 7 . 5/26/2005
*cries* No Jedah don't stop the blood storm yet!You haven't ripped Jon's head off yet. If you haven't figured out yet, I'm not much of a fan for Talbain or the Felicia/Talbain pairing.
Besides, it's more fun trying to pair Felicia with a human.
*recieves weird looks from people*
What? Can't someone pair an OC with Felicia?
Oh well, keep up with the good work.
| Red Witch Studios chapter 6 . 5/25/2005
Damn, this is getting good. *gets a big bowl of popcorn ready* Could you please read and review my story please?
| Baron Hausenpheffer chapter 3 . 5/5/2005
Yay, Jedah! Kick that throne-stealing-wimp-of-a-relative's butt! Good chapter. So, that weird giant baby from the game is Jedah and Marionette's son? Odd, but it makes sense. Again, good work!
| Baron Hausenpheffer chapter 2 . 5/5/2005
Well, this was a pretty good chapter. The story itself is pretty DARN good, but (no offense) your grammar needs work. Try checking it a few times before you post it. As I said, the story itself is great, so keep up the good work on that!
| Nightman chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
Oh man, Jedah is gonna be pissed!
*grabs popcorn and prepares for the blood bath*
Good job so far.
| Baron Hausenpheffer chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
This is very good. It delves pretty deep into Darkstalkers mythology, but I'm keeping up... I think. Anway, I like it and hope you continue.
(P.S. "Who, until he returns, shall rest within my womb."
Poor Marionette may have a long pregnancy ahead of her.)
| Valin Dymos chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
Very interesting story. A question though, how exactly did Jedah die?