|Reviews for Colors of Life and Death: Book 1|
| that guy chapter 31 . 3/8
MORE NARUHINA FLUFF BITCH!
| kitsunescythe chapter 33 . 3/2
No matter how many times I read this story, I still laugh a little at Naruto's "I haven't had time" when Sakura asks him why he hasn't finished moving out of his apartment yet. Dude, with your shadow clones, you'd be done in one trip. Haha. Classic not-thinking-ahead Naruto. :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/19/2013
Hmm yellow chakra, huh? Foreshadowing the actual manga right here!
| AnonOne chapter 37 . 11/9/2013
Hmmmm... Not bad. I find details and writing lacking a little, no offense to you.
I find that you shift scenes to fast and make the story somewhat choppy and uneven. The plot is very basic and rather simple. In fact, most of the story is not complicated at all. This is good for someone who likes easy to understand stories, but in my opinion, it doesn't make it really interesting at all.
Example: Rainbow chakra... Unusual, but rather blatant about making a good chakra.
Example: Naruto is captured twice. I kind of hoped that it wouldn't come to that. It had the feeling of "again?!".
In the matter of depth and detail to this story, it is one of the biggest flaws I find in this story. I know your facts are pretty outdated, but some things should've been emphasized.
Example: Orochimaru and Kabuto's deaths. These guys are very powerful shinobi and are not S-rank/A-rank for nothing. Orochimaru and Kabuto probably some the most manipulizing slimes in the entire course of the plot of Naruto and should've known that something was wrong with Itachi. For crying out loud, they're shinobi! The battle scene was too quick and even though that they were surprised and the lacking information on Itachi's black flames, it shouldn't have been that all-powerful.
Example: Your writing style is rather blunt to a point and you don't tend to draw out the tense moments enough. Although it helps advance the plot, it makes it too basic. However it was unpredictable due to the original style, but seemed to lack in creativity of each theme in the events.
Example: Naruto's nine memories. I know it would be tedious to wright and read for some people, but it really takes the significance and impact out of the chapter. You don't seem to like angst, but it feels like you've cut the corners to much on this. In the end, it didn't feel very sad at all.
The romance was also alright. A little too overly emotional at certain points and sometimes redundant. Otherwise it's fine.
Like I said, it's not bad, but it still should've been improved on. I know that it's pretty old, but still.
| fikataa90 chapter 18 . 10/6/2013
gotta say this is a really great story :)
| Mangaanimea113 chapter 37 . 8/21/2013
Wahhhh this is amazing! Fantastic!love the graphic violence and love and struggles naruto has to go through! Please keep going!
| queen serena chiba chapter 37 . 8/20/2013
i love it
| wolf-life chapter 23 . 8/17/2013
Wow great chapter and REALLY funny
| wolf-life chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
Amazing story, can't wait to read the next on...
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/28/2013
Omg I love it !
| DarkHinata42 chapter 20 . 7/2/2013
So SWEET 3
| DarkHinata42 chapter 19 . 7/2/2013
I hope Naruto forgives Jiraya. :(
| I'm The Tardis chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
This is great but WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO NARUTO :C
| Yolo chapter 10 . 5/11/2013
this is so Yolo and yololike sucks yolo.
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 4 . 5/1/2013