Reviews for Harry Potter and the Slytherin Spy
NatNicole chapter 6 . 4/9
THANK YOU, HERMIONE, GEORGE & FRED! Especially Hermione - '"I haven't spoken to her, so how would I know?"' is literally the BEST line in this entire story as far as I'm concerned!

P.S. Read the whole fic. It's very interesting! Though I coulda done without the kissing...
DMacX chapter 30 . 7/2/2015
If any story every needed a sequel, it's this one.

Extremely well written, with an extremely sad ending.
tk1760 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
great writing

my request to u is that just add oc character and harry potter in "characters" for the story . believe me i've read more harry potter novellas on fanfiction .net and i should have read this story earlier. it simply didn't come up because if u have no "characters" in the intro it is very difficult to find this story while sorting . trust me this story should be appreciated by more people so please add characters in the intro
Brodie1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
an excellent story and a sad one at that. I had hoped that Jane and Harry might have found some happiness but alas they didn't/ I would love to see a sequal if there is one, it would be nice to see the open ends tied off and for lack of a better word completion of a great story. You wrot a great story Christine and I for one thank you for sharing it. Take care.
Cathy-Ann chapter 11 . 5/27/2010
I will make a guess that Jane Kirkallen is the one who killed Nott and Crabbe in retaliation for her mom's death.
Cap'n Awesome chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Oh. My. God. How could you? I wanted to know who Jane's father was! I feel so... cheated! Is it Snape? Are you implying that at the end? Did you decide, while you were writing this story, or is it one of those 'no one knows' things? I really want to know. I liked Jane. All the way through. It's always the characters I like that turn out to be bad in the end. :( But I still loved reading it.
Dracis Tran chapter 30 . 1/19/2010
This is a very good story. I know it's been a while since you wrote it, but I figured you'd want my thoughts even so.

Partially because I'm terrible at figuring such things out, and partially because I think you obscured the mystery quite well, I didn't figure out it was Jane until the Imperious Curse (I'd be shocked if Snape didn't know that Harry could throw it off, even at that point in the story). In retrospect, I probably should have seen it... but I wanted a Harry/Jane happy ending too much for me to really think about it objectively.

Needless to say, I did not get such a wish granted.

I'm thinking one of the main points of your narrative was the fact that people don't generally treat each other all that well, particularly at the tender ages of fifteen and sixteen. It tended to make me frustrated that these kids wouldn't act mature!... but they're not, so they didn't.

My major quibble is the ending. It felt rushed, certain threads (*cough*RonHermioneLuna*cough*) were not resolved (It would have been fine not to have him choose, I think. What irked me is that Ron didn't learn anything, so the arc felt pointless), other threads (LupinTonks) were resolved too neatly, particularly when placed side-by-side with the other arcs in this fic.

Malfoy and Harry's rivalry was shown very well in this story, and felt like the most natural thing in the world to both of them. The lack of open animosity due to the killings/suicides and the resultant exploration of a schoolboy rival relationship was quite brilliant. Overall, well done.
Terrible Tues chapter 30 . 10/20/2008
Great story. I hope I can find a sequel somewhere.
cazertanu chapter 30 . 9/29/2008
best 6 year story ever.

to hell with JKR.

i fell for jane
Amanthya chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Only had time to skim this, but it looks good. I'll be back to read more!
WinterChanterelle chapter 30 . 8/4/2007
I knew it was her, of course. Right from the very first murder. Still, this was... horrifying. The fact that I knew somehow doesn't affect the fact that I'm currenly shaking.

And you put this under 'General'? This is horror, that's what it is.

Very well written horror.
eyes of sky chapter 4 . 1/12/2007
Ooh what a cliffie! Good job the next chapter is already there...

If only all problems could be solved so easily by Ginny :) Would save a lot of angsting - thanks for that!
eyes of sky chapter 3 . 1/12/2007
Well, the DA accepted Blaise Zabini, finally so I suppose...
Altariel4 chapter 30 . 7/24/2006

canela chapter 30 . 7/20/2006
Well, congratulations for this really awsome story. And for creating the best OC character ever. You are a very good writer and I hope you try to write something apart from fanfic and get it published.

As much as I was impressed by your writing style and everything I didn't like some parts of the plot. Revenge is a really wrong concept in my eyes but in the case of Jane understandeble. but how she could get the idea to kill the children of deatheaters instead of their fathers I can't really understand. Not to forget she doesn't even know which deatheaters were guilty for what happened to her mother.

But I don't want to critizize you too much. It is a fantastic fic and I have no idea at all why you don't have at least 20 reviews :).

Please keep up the good work!
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