Reviews for Midnight Guardian |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting increasingly silly. 1) they all know Sirius protected HP, spirited him away to heal, gave him away to actual healers when he understood the guy needed better healing than he could provide. Lupin knows Sirius stayed with HP for a week or so, even sleeping nearby Yet they all tell him that S. is the betrayer without mentioning any doubts? 2) Vernon is getting slammed "without trial"? That's not how it works, even if you plead guilty, you do it during the trial. Throwing a guy in the can without a trial because he's so obviously guilty is exactly the focus of clasterfuck with Sirius and then they do it AGAIN? 3) why the minister, alone, personally interrogates HP? Where were the aurors? If this is a part of investigation, why noone has written down his testimony? Low quality fic, I'm outta here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbles openly gives orders to the minister? Scratch that, the minister is delivering a debrief to dumbles and then wait to receive orders? That's a non-canon power dynamic there. Canon has the "grandfatherly act" and orders are veiled as helpful advices. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i never leave reviews, but I HAVE to say;holy shit , why does harry pass out SO much in this. there are other ways to make an ending to a confrontation damn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this a genre for Harry-Haters? You make him as weak, contemptable and clueless as possible. Any ill fortune absolutely must befall Harry. Make sure you burden him with the oaf Weasley and the idiot Dumbledore. How did he ever get through previous years? Can he tie his shoes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Far from a good fic, in my opinion. Harry is turned into basically a useless lump. I get that he was abused and traumatized, but suddenly he can't do anything for himself, he has a completely unrealistic relationship with the Hogwarts staff, and he and his friends just don't behave how children would. I'm sure it's a difficult thing to write a child well, but I found myself rolling my eyes almost constantly while reading this. Wouldn't recommend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was very good indeed. Lots of fun and I'm happy that you made Lupin a central character and made a more in-depth story for Harry that twisted book 3 of Harry Potter in a dramatic new way to witness. I hope there will be a sequel to read. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting story so far. With everything Harry has been through, Lupin is the only one who had been completely honest with him. Liking this story more and more. Onward to the next chapter. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Professor Trelawney, however, was not amused as she stood up. And Scabbers has been kept in the boy's room in this AU. So either you're making the 13 sitting thing a myth in this AU or you're killing off Trelawney. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I'm sorry Harry. There's nothing that anyone can do to repair it. Professor Dumbledore already tried." Not even the Elder wand can repair a broken up Nimbus 2000. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Diese fanfiction ist Phantastisch |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep, I gave this a shot but Dumbledore as the patient and understanding grandfather made me want to throw up. Sorry, nothing against your writing, I'm just not a fan of Dumbledore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore should blame himself. He put Harry with the Dursleys. He never checked on Harry. He is as guilty of the abuse as they are. I don't know if I can do a innocent Dumbledore story but I'll give it a try. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic and a much better ending to the story than canon |
![]() ![]() ![]() About damn time |