Reviews for Midnight Guardian |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Far from a good fic, in my opinion. Harry is turned into basically a useless lump. I get that he was abused and traumatized, but suddenly he can't do anything for himself, he has a completely unrealistic relationship with the Hogwarts staff, and he and his friends just don't behave how children would. I'm sure it's a difficult thing to write a child well, but I found myself rolling my eyes almost constantly while reading this. Wouldn't recommend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was very good indeed. Lots of fun and I'm happy that you made Lupin a central character and made a more in-depth story for Harry that twisted book 3 of Harry Potter in a dramatic new way to witness. I hope there will be a sequel to read. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting story so far. With everything Harry has been through, Lupin is the only one who had been completely honest with him. Liking this story more and more. Onward to the next chapter. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Professor Trelawney, however, was not amused as she stood up. And Scabbers has been kept in the boy's room in this AU. So either you're making the 13 sitting thing a myth in this AU or you're killing off Trelawney. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I'm sorry Harry. There's nothing that anyone can do to repair it. Professor Dumbledore already tried." Not even the Elder wand can repair a broken up Nimbus 2000. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Diese fanfiction ist Phantastisch |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep, I gave this a shot but Dumbledore as the patient and understanding grandfather made me want to throw up. Sorry, nothing against your writing, I'm just not a fan of Dumbledore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore should blame himself. He put Harry with the Dursleys. He never checked on Harry. He is as guilty of the abuse as they are. I don't know if I can do a innocent Dumbledore story but I'll give it a try. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic and a much better ending to the story than canon |
![]() ![]() ![]() About damn time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, but Wormtail. Remember him |
![]() ![]() ![]() The map, Harry. The map |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry’s instincts were always better than most people’s |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s hard to accept the professors’s collective stupidity. Snape needed to be fired. He complains about immature students but never grew up. Of course, he never sought, much less got, treatment |
![]() ![]() ![]() No excuse for what Snape did to Harry. Not spying, James behavior, or losing Lily. The magic is more realistic than Snape teaching anywhere. Especially when it impacted the number of healers, cops, and herbologists. |