Reviews for Midnight Guardian
Guest chapter 18 . 3/15/2021
Oh yes, the dramatic pain and the dramatic "there is no pain" and all the dramatic drama...oh good grief. And there's Remus again with all his "gentle touches"...that's starting to be pretty damn creepy. Why is everyone sitting around yammering on and on and on and on and on when the animagus reversal spell would take less than 15 seconds?
Guest chapter 14 . 3/14/2021
I've started skimming over the over-traumatization of perma-trauma-boy. It's far too overblown and after a while it just gets old.

And it does not take 649 weeks to determined if a broom was jinkxed or not; stop it with the artificial drama.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/14/2021
Poor Harry comes off sounding like a scared, maladjusted 7 year old.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/14/2021
So Minerva wasn't around when Sirius' howler blasted Albus for allowing the Dursleys to abuse Harry? And if Albus "didn't know" about all the abuse, how did he know that there were problems getting the Dursleys to accept THE OWL?
Guest chapter 2 . 3/14/2021
*pfft* Like Albus didn't purposefully abandon Harry ON THE DOORSTEP - IN THE MIDDLE OF A VERY COLD NIGHT - of Lily's MAGIC HATING sister that everyone knew she didn't get along with at all. Of course he's going to act all innocent about it now...poor misunderstood Albus...it was only FOR THE GREATER GOOD...
ScurrilousPurrilous chapter 10 . 3/9/2021
You need to research the uses of past vs passed.
ScurrilousPurrilous chapter 8 . 3/9/2021
British people don’t say ‘anyways’. Ever.
ScurrilousPurrilous chapter 6 . 3/9/2021
It would be a vial of potion, not a vile. No one in the United Kingdom uses the word ‘anyways’, least of all Serverus SnapeIt is a ‘vile’ Americanism.
MellarkandArt chapter 20 . 3/6/2021
Awww loved this!
anotheraddict chapter 7 . 1/2/2021
"It was amazing how much something as simple as not being allowed outdoors could change one's mentality."

and here we are in 2021, still dealing with a lockdown(at least in the USA)
Guest chapter 5 . 1/1/2021
Yep, those grown men sure do love holding Harry down...
Guest chapter 4 . 1/1/2021
Those grown men sure do love manhandling little boys, don't they?
Guest chapter 3 . 1/1/2021
Oh, here's an obviously beaten, battered, broken, bruised boy - let's touch him all over and wake him up so he can hurt even more!11!1
khatre chapter 10 . 1/1/2021
If Anyone in PoA actually talked to each other instead of keeping secrets the story would have ended about 2 weeks into the school year...
"Yes, Black was an animagus and turned into a dog .. did I forget to tell you that James was an animagus too? and turned into a deer? oh .. yea .. Peeeeeter ... did I forget to mention that he was a Rat? Because I can't tell you that until the big surprise at the end of the book. Because .. REASONS!"
SarahOlivier chapter 6 . 12/25/2020
Harry isn't an idiot for trusting the one person who treated like a person. Sirius is the only person who has ever treated Harry like a person.
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