For the first time in Love Hina fics history i wanted Naru to be happy, and i dont know why, i hate the btch, but you give her that human quality that make her likable.

Just one doubt were the hell is Haruka and most of all SARA, im starting to note that she is not getting any atention form any author.

great fic and a great work thank you.

DUDE THIS IS THE MOST GREATEST FANFIC I'VE EVER RED THAT IS IN KEITARO POINT OF VIEW OR POV JUST SUPERB. I JUST HOPE U CAN WRIT OTHER FANFIC LIKE THIS IT SHALL BE GREAT, OR AN ANOTHER VERSION OF HOPE I SEE FANFICS LIKE THIS OUT

THIS IS AN EXCELLENT STORY BY Keitaro POV I HOPE U MAKE Next stories like this its kinda good this Makin more stories or a Sequel POV works Better as its Interesting.

Absolutly awesome. You touched my heart. I had read this story very often and it is like a good wine. Every time its getting better. I wanted to thank you for this great story. I always loved Motoko/Kei story and yours are the best. Every time i read the line "The End" i wish it would continue. I realy hope that Keitaro will tell us how the story continue. Thanks, you are awesome.

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“So… your room… or mine... Kei-kun?” Motoko whispered with a seductive smile.

“Huh? So… who’s the pervert now?”

oh my god..i think i'm gonna faint...

pure perfection!

out of all the stories i have read(and i read a few :P) this is rated as my favourite 'love hina' story.

Well done!

Your Story is awesome!

I was a bit disappointed at first when you destroyed the allmighty relationship between Naru and Keitaro, but I'm glad that you created something that excuses this ''mistake'' totally. I'm looking forward to Foolish Heart CH. 6!

Love Hina forever!

more...more...more!

ireally liked this story it was so well...it made me kinda fluffly inside (lol) hope u make some fanfics soon!

I'm ashamed of my last review... so I'll try again.

This piece of fiction is just... magical. There is really nothing else that can convey the greatness and power of this work.

I don't know how you did it, but somehow you manage to convey the feelings, the emotions, the actions of the characters... so well... that i'm left speechless. I'm sure that other readers were left equally in awe.

The interaction between Mutsumi, Keitaro and Naru were truly astounding. Its a very accurate embodiment of what I think Ken Akamatsu himself would write in this scenario.

Still... now that I have read the story again... I realise that perhaps ending the story with Motoko as the winner wasn't the best choice.

She just doesn't fit Keitaro as well as Naru does. While Motoko is the exact opposite of Keitaro and would fit well with him, Naru is just the person he has been waiting for, yearning for for eight whole years.

Surely he wouldn't just dump eight years of his life behind him in search of something... else.

Still, a masterpiece. (I want to save it!)

Great work. Really great.

hey wonderful story i hope you can make another great keitaro and motoko fic

~KM~

whoowh! didin't think it'll get me this good! haha i really liked your story! yep also loved the pairing! ;p although i didn't like it much at the start... well i got a surprise! it got me real good! just couldn't stop from reading! aiyah! this is really great! well hope you make other stories like this! well kepp up the good work kei? ;p

Mutsumi really is a frood (really amazingly together person) insn't she?

KEITARO AND MOTOKO 4 EVER!