I give you my congrats... Another fic Well done... Im REALLY expecting to see more fics from you.. SOON... or I may have to break out a Wakazi... anyways... Good job, and Best of wishes on your next Fanfictions!

~Drazen_Flames~

plz plz plz ! you got to write more! tell what happens in their lives! and i am so happy that its a motoko and keitaro i would kill you if it was a naru and urashima!lol(read my storys)

Perhaps a comedic epilogue is in order. This story has been so serious that I just want to see the ending created by someone on how the residants will live after Keitaro has chosen and been accepted.

He couldn't have with Naru could he No...

it had to Motoko. *sigh*

It was a wonderful fic!...It's a pity its finished...I hope you write other fic... I like your writing...

Wow, good ending but I really hope that there is a sequel that will go through the times afterwards with Keitaro and Motoko. Do they both move to Keitaro's or stay in Japan or what? Anyways the story is awesome and I hope for a sequel.

God that was a perfect ending, you really know how to tell a good story...

Keep Writing!

~~Rineko~~

P.S~ Have a Rose... };-

I must say that is just what I expected to see , well shown and well described MUSTUMI!

You gave her a good part in the story-two thumbs up from me.

KEITARO/MUTSUMI FOREVER!

But since it ended Keit/Mot I can't say nothing more that-it was another , well written Keit/Mot is my number ONE LH girl but Motoko is a close second.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORk.

Bravo! Absolutely brilliant! As a HUGE Kei/Mot fan i was happy to see them finally get together like they did. The final dialogue was perfect as was the timing between the two. Heh, who really IS the pervert now i wonder? Until your next venture into Hinata-Sou...laters.

sigh... so nice...

That was a really good fic and a great ending. Thank you for writing this!

those last comments are true. i heard of ppl that get out of commisions for so long b/c of that...

update dude!

I still love.. Update!

nice done buddy, its really getting intresting. I cant wait to see how it will end. It sure will be a hard choice, but somehow i'm getting the feeling you're going for Motoko... anyway, i love this story so keep it up. The suspense is just killing me.

hehe maybe it would be a good idea to lengthen it even more: keitaro gets struck by lightning and falls in a coma. a few years later he finally wakes up and he has to start this all over again. lol that would just do it for me

Wow! I mean Wow!. What a turn of events...But I still have to go with Motoko.. I mean come on who wouldn't. After 8 EIGHT years of suffering you can't just have keitaro forgive and forget just like that (Snaps fingers for effect). Motoko was waiting for keitaro to return while naru goes out and gets engaged. Beside at least Naru has someone to fall back on, that Mervin guy, if, and hopefully when, keitaro rejects her, while Motoko has none. Keitaro is the only MALE motoko trust and loves, you just can't break her poor heart, she has suffered enough. DAMN YOU IF YOU MAKE MOTOKO SUFFER ANYMORE. Any ways, good story update soon. AND PLEASE CHOOSE MOTOKO, if you do I will continue to review, yeah thats it. I will continue to review AND I'll even go back re-read the WHOLE story and review EVER SINGLE chapter. How does that sound? Good, Great now update so that Motoko can get her MALE/Man.