After reading this chapter, man, i was so confused more than ever. at first, i was rooting for motoko cause she's the one i liked a the most out of all the hinata girls, but now, after this chapter, i think i'm being carried away by naru's confession. man! i think, you made your story a bit more complicated to deal with, but, it's great. i hope to see the next chapter. if you need a pre-reader, just send me your chapter at: cheesewriter

aw. Naru seems so sad... I still think he should choose Motoko!

DANG! he was pissed...haha cant say i blame him though, 8 years...thats quite sometime...anyhow thats quite a twist you put there...I dunno but I'm more for Motoko...cause i mean, it must eb hard on her, she doesn hate men, well most men...as for Naru...well i dunno...what a cliffhanger...update soon

Great fic, hope you make it Keitaro/Naru one!

Well, this is a great chapter, I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope that it is going to end up being a Keitaro/Motoko fic. But I also hope that you don't make everyone hate eachother in the end of this fic. PLease keep writing because this is just so good.

This story is awesome. Ole keitaro's got himself in another predicament. Right now im really wondering who he'll go with? Naru all the way! Hooha! Good story keep it up...and update more...Good luck

I'm a Keitaro/Motoko fan so...

And to the below reviewer, Keitaro uses the name Narusegawa in the Japanese anime and manga. I think it sounds a lot nicer.

I personally believe that the voice actors in the dubbed version need to die. (Horrible voices _

Great chapter. Very emotional. Finally, Keitaro was able to get that off of his chest. Hope you update soon.

Keitaro/Motoko, forever.

Good, I'm seeing hope in a Kei/Na fic.

Why do you always call her Narusegawa? Just wondering.

get him to motoko! I FREAKING NO U WANT HER!lol c'mon plz? nice chap any ways

Finally! Decision time for Keitaro! I hope he chooses...number three! Mutsumi!

Sorry about that. Just had to do that since I'm a Mutsumi fan. She's waited the longest out of the three of them after all.

Anyway, I hope he chooses Motoko. She doesn't have anyone while Naru has Mervin.

Update soon please!

TornadoR:Oy Keitaro!You lucky have so many girls aroud its hard do decide , but since you called for help I might be the person to help you.

Keitaro:What?Who are you?

Naru:I don't know him but somehow I feel that he isnot from this world.I also feel that he will support Mutsumi.

TornadoR:That's rigt , MY FAV LH GIRL IS MUTSUMI but since the 'story creator' didn't give you the chance to actualy be with her I'll support my second fav LH girl.

Keitaro:And that girl is?

Naru:...Mo...Moto...Motoko.

TornadoR:Bingo second fav LH girl is and Naru-have a good life with Mervin.

Ok you two im out of here , this dimensional travels are not so easy as the Keitaro , think about Motoko.

Well written finaly snapped?He may be OOC and personaly I think that's not a problem in this particular story.I don't know how about the other readers/reviewers but I'm waiting for a FINAL:]

So my votes are simple-MUTSUMI , MOTOKO:]]

Update soon.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

my god... what a good ending.

AWW IT MADE ME WANT TO CRY...

k. this is a really good story. but...

*evil face* I HATE PEOPLE WHO TRY TO GET KEITARO AWAY FROM NARU OR NARU AWAY FROM KEITARO *evil face*

umm.

well, even though Keitaro has been extemely OOC this chapter and most of the story, I still think Naru would be the best choice...

OMFG! Keitaro finally snapped! Good for him. Personally i think he should pick Motoko only because she didnt have an ulterior motive. C'mon if Naru really wanted to get in touch with keitaro cuz someone asked her to marry her she could have. My vote is Motoko