Reviews for Trial and Error
Matcataroonroon chapter 6 . 4/15
Ok. Bro. This story was so freakin amazing. You had me literally sobbing. It was just do good.
Awesome job! Hope to see some more stuff like this.
Ireland Scott of BROH chapter 6 . 4/14
lunamoon531 chapter 6 . 3/3
I cried. I laughed. I grinned. I fucking loved this.
Zela Night chapter 6 . 11/5/2017
This is cannon!
Please let this be cannon!
I would make the series so much better!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/1/2017
Luiz4200 chapter 2 . 6/29/2017
Iruka is an idiot.
Bearmauls chapter 6 . 5/4/2017
That was pretty excellent. Not sure I like the very end, though. Feels like Naruto would need to take several steps back to arrive at his canon state.
Arrexu chapter 1 . 9/6/2016
Why arashi? is this written before namikaze Minato was introduced? if not then the name is really cliché
Velsked chapter 6 . 6/25/2016
In most fanfictions, author usually introduces someone who holds no grudge against the jinchuriki and trains him. This was different. It showed the development btw naruto and his teachers. Konoha populace was potrayed quite accurately including iruka and i loved how u made naruto a secret genius like minato, gave him some of her mothers traits, but didnt make him godlike or something. Most authors make him either a sissy or some arrogant jerk.

Thank you for this short story. It was quite realistic if u see it in terms of the anime.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/10/2016
That was the best thing I've read today. Brought tears to my eyes. It's cool as well knowing how it's sort of plausible to be put into the canon timelime. Awesome story!
jon reeve chapter 6 . 4/18/2016
Excellent. I like alternate character interpretations for the characters with seemingly inconsistent mental acuity. Bravo.
Cardcaptor Kat chapter 6 . 3/25/2016
I never cry. Only very, very, very, rarely do I get misty eyes, but I almost never cry. This story, it was just what I was looking for, something to entertain myself for awhile. But your story has touched me, and finally
after each chapter more emotional than the previous, chapter 6 made me cry like a baby. (Of course in a secured location, warded with the best bombs available) Anyways, thank you for a spectacular story, I sincerely hope you will continue. -Kat
d chapter 6 . 10/11/2015
I cried so hard when Ruito died. You made it so tragic and sad that it was impossible not cry. I was disapointed when I didnt see that you a sequel.
g335949251 chapter 6 . 8/18/2015
Great story ! Keep the great work can't wait for the next chapter. I would probably have liked it more had there been a funeral . I also thought it would make naruto able to grive a bit more and not look like he just went from denial and grieve to happy in like 10min
Aya Wanderlust chapter 6 . 6/24/2015
No matter how many times I've read this, i still cry at the same part... nice story!

-Wanderlust no tsubasa
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