|Reviews for While The Children Played|
| JKWilliams chapter 1 . 11/23/2000
oh no, this was sad but i love Star Wars. It was good though
| Getzo chapter 1 . 9/22/2000
why. why. why? good fic
| Julia chapter 1 . 4/24/2000
Oh, that was so sad. But I liked it.
| Queen Naberrie chapter 1 . 4/21/2000
Vader killed Amidala? Don't believe it'll ever happen. This was a bit short, but was a good concept- it deserves elaboration, which would work wonders for it.
| Theed chapter 1 . 4/21/2000
I love the last line! ) This was a very descriptive story. A few things though: Where was Amidala? I mean, what planet? It seemed like Naboo, but I wasn't sure. And what about all that stuff about Leia remembering her when she was very young? Children don't develop memories until a few months old. Also, why did Vader kill her? I do think that he will, and I'm not sure why myself. But, I would like to see your point of view.