Reviews for Unlikely Alliances
nayin17 chapter 3 . 4/5
The only thing I don't like here is when the insufferable know-it-all won over Ginny. I'm glad Ron will get another partner and I don't care if the bookworm will end up with Dumbledore itself
nayin17 chapter 2 . 4/5
I love Chapters 22... I do pity Draco and but since I'm such a hard-core H/G fan, I'm glad he and Ginny will remain friends. I wish Ginny will also be in Harry's year
nayin17 chapter 1 . 4/4
Oh wow! Chapters 1-15 all in one page...wow! Wish it's not the case so I can write a review for almost all the chapters that I liked. I like how Harry and Ginny got together. I'm a hard-core Harry/Ginny fan but I feel so sorry about Draco. I'm just glad that there's another person besides Harry who appreciates her. I love your Ron, he's not a git that most authors portray him. I hope there's more H/G coz I don't care about the others like the bookworm, Remus and even Tonks
ReadingBeaver chapter 5 . 2/14
I was correct.
ReadingBeaver chapter 1 . 2/12
About to start this story. (Knowing me I'll become hooked and will finish this and the sequel in 2 days.)
Wish me luck! Maybe this time I will remember to sleep and maybe eat.. Probably not though.
Person chapter 3 . 7/26/2014
Your fanfic is really good! How long did it take you to write this?
regpeg chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
This is such a good story! I read the whole thing! Love it! What is the sequel called?
Samishere21 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
Great! Really good story line and plot! Thanks for writing!
TheGoldenTrioFan chapter 5 . 2/16/2013
yay i finally persevered and read through a whole story! haven't managed that in a while. Off to read the sequel now.
Rachel chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
¡H! thats a really amazing story! Can u plz post wat the sequel story is called
mahhhfy chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
This has been an absolutely incredible story to read. There were times I had to walk away from the story because the smile I couldn't wipe off my face started to hurt. It's wonderfully written, very realistic but also very interesting at the same time. I really like how it's not at all like what happens in the books, but it just as easily could have been. There wasn't a single time I thought that something would never actually happen. I really like how Draco gradually became friends with everyone, and the even more gradual progression of things between Snape and Hermione. Too often I'll read stories that have good ideas but it's too rushed, and that's not a problem here. You also take the time to let the kids be normal teenagers who have school and normal drama, but also throwing some awesome powers into the mix. I'm very excited the start reading the sequel. Thanks for writing!
DragonFire Princess chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.

When will you continue this story?

I want to know what will happen next in the story.
DestroyerDRT chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Are you still writing? You are one of best I have read the works of.
BruceTN chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Some people complain about short postings (usually chapters). However, I don't. I don't always have large blocks of time to read. "bookmarking" or "favourites" in browsers tend to mark only a web page, not the place on the page. Because of that, stories that have long "chapters" - postings - can be hard to read.

Your "unlikely alliance" is one such. You have broken your book into chapters, but have posted multiple logical chapters as one physical chapter, which means that there is no easy way to read some, and come back later to read more.

I don't know about other readers, but I would find it easier to read your story if each logical chapter were one physical chapter.

Nonetheless, thank you for taking the time to scribe your tale.

Bruce
James018 chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
Good story. The writing could have been better, particularly early on, but the storyline and characterisation were both very compellin. Thanks for sharing this story.
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