|Reviews for Monster|
| UnluckyWriter chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
this is really really good. plz continue!
| Nenilein chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
To bad you stopped writting. I like were this was going.
Could have evolved into a pretty awesome story, maybe even worthy the TV-series.
| Sonicmario chapter 2 . 1/17/2006
I see why you stopped making this...THIS IS THE WORST FANFIC EVER! I HATE IT! I ESPECIALLY HATE MAC's MOM! HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATEHATEHATEHATE!
| wonta be a gost chapter 2 . 4/21/2005
keep wrighting,i need to know wut happens next!
| DanMat6288 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
I keep trying to contact you, but you seem to be ignoring me!
Look at my ideas and, whether you take them or not, CONTINUE!
| Spice Of Life Too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
AH! JAO! You write Foster's? YAY! You so should have told me!
...::goes to read the rest::
This isn't going to have an unbelievably sad ending like most of your others, is it? _
| Fullmetal Mac chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
| Shazi M chapter 2 . 1/6/2005
Really really good so far. You've done the characters as best as I figured they'd be in the situation given. I was aware of Hex before I read this story and she seems like a very interesting char. Besides that, very very good. Poor Mac. Poor Bloo...oh whats gonna happen? :p
| NumbuhInfinity chapter 2 . 10/9/2004
So I'm guessing you're not updating anymore? That's too bad, I wanted to see this continue...
| Ravinesque chapter 2 . 9/25/2004
You're really good. Don't stop! pLeAsE!
| Raifiel chapter 2 . 9/22/2004
Yays! Another Chapter well done! Can I be your personal fanfic stalker? You write it so well...so much...better than some of the others here. So do tell me if I can, and keep writeing! Good job!
| Terrichance chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Oh shoot, I got you mixed up with somebody else from DA, I am SO sorry. You're the one that did the Blackmail material piece, ;
Still great work. Hope to see more from you soon.
| Terrichance chapter 2 . 9/20/2004
I can't help but say wow to the stuff so far. I've just reecently joined the FhFiF club on DeviantArt, so... I KNOW WHO YOU ARE. You're that Wilt fan that's made the giant plushie of him, XD
Still, how much of this story have you got planned out? A plot twist that I personally would think of, would be if they found Mac's Mom's old Imaginary friend, and reunited the two. I have a design and name for said friend too, so if you're interested, contact me. Otherwise, just do what you feel like doing, XD; Keep up the good work!
| Nick.l chapter 2 . 9/19/2004
It seems that there shoud be one more charter.A 22 year old named nick (thats me)A contry singer who wares a cowboy hat that is boyfriend with frankie and a 2th best friend to Luck
| The Dirt chapter 2 . 9/19/2004
Great story. Please finish it. I'm desperate! lol