Reviews for Monster
UnluckyWriter chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
this is really really good. plz continue!
Nenilein chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
To bad you stopped writting. I like were this was going.

Could have evolved into a pretty awesome story, maybe even worthy the TV-series.
Sonicmario chapter 2 . 1/17/2006
I see why you stopped making this...THIS IS THE WORST FANFIC EVER! I HATE IT! I ESPECIALLY HATE MAC's MOM! HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATEHATEHATEHATE!
wonta be a gost chapter 2 . 4/21/2005
KOOl

keep wrighting,i need to know wut happens next!

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DanMat6288 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
I keep trying to contact you, but you seem to be ignoring me!

Look at my ideas and, whether you take them or not, CONTINUE!
Spice Of Life Too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
AH! JAO! You write Foster's? YAY! You so should have told me!

...::goes to read the rest::

This isn't going to have an unbelievably sad ending like most of your others, is it? _
Fullmetal Mac chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Well done.
Shazi M chapter 2 . 1/6/2005
Really really good so far. You've done the characters as best as I figured they'd be in the situation given. I was aware of Hex before I read this story and she seems like a very interesting char. Besides that, very very good. Poor Mac. Poor Bloo...oh whats gonna happen? :p
NumbuhInfinity chapter 2 . 10/9/2004
So I'm guessing you're not updating anymore? That's too bad, I wanted to see this continue...
Ravinesque chapter 2 . 9/25/2004
You're really good. Don't stop! pLeAsE!
Raifiel chapter 2 . 9/22/2004
Yays! Another Chapter well done! Can I be your personal fanfic stalker? You write it so well...so much...better than some of the others here. So do tell me if I can, and keep writeing! Good job!
Terrichance chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Oh shoot, I got you mixed up with somebody else from DA, I am SO sorry. You're the one that did the Blackmail material piece, ;

Still great work. Hope to see more from you soon.
Terrichance chapter 2 . 9/20/2004
I can't help but say wow to the stuff so far. I've just reecently joined the FhFiF club on DeviantArt, so... I KNOW WHO YOU ARE. You're that Wilt fan that's made the giant plushie of him, XD

Still, how much of this story have you got planned out? A plot twist that I personally would think of, would be if they found Mac's Mom's old Imaginary friend, and reunited the two. I have a design and name for said friend too, so if you're interested, contact me. Otherwise, just do what you feel like doing, XD; Keep up the good work!
Nick.l chapter 2 . 9/19/2004
It seems that there shoud be one more charter.A 22 year old named nick (thats me)A contry singer who wares a cowboy hat that is boyfriend with frankie and a 2th best friend to Luck
The Dirt chapter 2 . 9/19/2004
Great story. Please finish it. I'm desperate! lol
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